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Array ( [sid] => 4644 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => amanda [time] => 2002-10-05 14:15:00 [hometext] => This is a poem to the ex that dumped me for my best friend. She told me today that im worse than she is. Same with my last poem...any comments? post them. Plz [bodytext] => You say your no worse than i
***** ***** You lie!
your the one dumpin me cause my friend gives ***** *****
you treat me as if i am dead
You use to never stop talkin about me
what ever happend to you missin me?
you now treat me like im no longer something
and like what U felt for me was nothing
your the one trying to make my friends cry
makeing them feel worthless, as if they want to die
tellin me im ugly, ur the one that was mad cause i didnt kiss u
and ur bf, hes runs his mouth just as much as u
your a match made in heaven
breakin more then the seven
you preach god, I dont belive
u think im bad cause i dont see
what u see, that gods real
ur PreCIoUs bf belives it just as i feal
he's So much like i am now, u dont see

HE DONT CARE

THe way We use to be, ITS OvER
The way I cared, Is nO loNgEr [comments] => 1 [counter] => 485 [topic] => 6 [informant] => tweaks2004 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

amanda

Contributed by tweaks2004 on Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 02:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You say your no worse than i
***** ***** You lie!
your the one dumpin me cause my friend gives ***** *****
you treat me as if i am dead
You use to never stop talkin about me
what ever happend to you missin me?
you now treat me like im no longer something
and like what U felt for me was nothing
your the one trying to make my friends cry
makeing them feel worthless, as if they want to die
tellin me im ugly, ur the one that was mad cause i didnt kiss u
and ur bf, hes runs his mouth just as much as u
your a match made in heaven
breakin more then the seven
you preach god, I dont belive
u think im bad cause i dont see
what u see, that gods real
ur PreCIoUs bf belives it just as i feal
he's So much like i am now, u dont see

HE DONT CARE

THe way We use to be, ITS OvER
The way I cared, Is nO loNgEr

Copyright © tweaks2004 ... [ 2002-10-05 14:15:00]
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Re: amanda (User Rating: 1 )
by aubz_09 on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 02:36:45 PM AEST
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Brian~ you are so hot. you wrtie so well! That freakin girl is crazy to dump you. I'll be your girlfriend! gosh! luv ya ~aubz

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