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Array ( [sid] => 46690 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ToTaLiTaRiaNiSM iN DeSTRuCTioN [time] => 2004-05-08 17:15:35 [hometext] => THiS iS a VeRY aNTi- WaR, aNTi- BusH PoeM... CaNNoT STaND KNoWiNG MY LiFe iS iN HiS SLiMeY FiNGeRS! uGH!!!!! (It doesnt rhyme, but sometimes it doesnt need to) [bodytext] => Hovering over the dead bodies
A friend, a lover, a sibling, a mother
Struck down by hatred- these casualties
Engulping the world in pure black pain.

Someone once told me to fight for what I believe in
These two small hands can make a difference
Let it be known that they hold the power
A totalitarian in destruction.

Patriotism teaches nothing but anger
A life based around one country makes us selfish
We are not the only human beings of this planet
It doesnt change anything if each skin color is a new hue.

When you preach you only get out an army of followers
But they're standing behind the wrong person
Bush is great at breaking things
But who's paying for those horrible debts?

Judgement can be bagged up in little zip locks
But it doesnt hold any truth over anything else
Someone somewhere needs to stand up
And stop this unjustifyable destruction of life.

DOWN WITH BUSH! DOWN WITH WAR!
Chanted through the streets...
DOWN WITH DESTRUCTION! UP WITH LIFE!
Who is ready for a new beginning? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 57 [informant] => xslashxprettyxskinx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => war )
ToTaLiTaRiaNiSM iN DeSTRuCTioN

Contributed by xslashxprettyxskinx on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 05:15:35 PM in AEST
Topic: war



Hovering over the dead bodies
A friend, a lover, a sibling, a mother
Struck down by hatred- these casualties
Engulping the world in pure black pain.

Someone once told me to fight for what I believe in
These two small hands can make a difference
Let it be known that they hold the power
A totalitarian in destruction.

Patriotism teaches nothing but anger
A life based around one country makes us selfish
We are not the only human beings of this planet
It doesnt change anything if each skin color is a new hue.

When you preach you only get out an army of followers
But they're standing behind the wrong person
Bush is great at breaking things
But who's paying for those horrible debts?

Judgement can be bagged up in little zip locks
But it doesnt hold any truth over anything else
Someone somewhere needs to stand up
And stop this unjustifyable destruction of life.

DOWN WITH BUSH! DOWN WITH WAR!
Chanted through the streets...
DOWN WITH DESTRUCTION! UP WITH LIFE!
Who is ready for a new beginning?




Copyright © xslashxprettyxskinx ... [ 2004-05-08 17:15:35]
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Re: ToTaLiTaRiaNiSM iN DeSTRuCTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by Dralion on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:11:34 PM AEST
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Who is ready for a new beginning?



I AM
[thenextwar.blogspot.com]


Re: ToTaLiTaRiaNiSM iN DeSTRuCTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by blackmarker on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:41:15 AM AEST
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Nice, I like it. Agreed, Bush sucks. lol.. I'm not American.. but.. still.
I once saw a shirt that said "Why isn't it called terrorism if the United States does it?" -Sigh- an excellent question.

Anyways. I'm babbling. Yes, great write!


Re: ToTaLiTaRiaNiSM iN DeSTRuCTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by SuperAsh16 on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 02:53:09 AM AEST
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i absolutely agree. down with bush. up with life. i hate living in this country while its under his dictatorship. it sucks, dont it. this is why im not proud to be and american.


Re: ToTaLiTaRiaNiSM iN DeSTRuCTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:34:08 PM AEST
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What amazes me is that Bush still has a 48% approval rating. What does he have to do for people to see he's a bad president, anal rape his mother while his kids are watching?


Re: ToTaLiTaRiaNiSM iN DeSTRuCTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:45:57 PM AEST
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This poem was really inspiring. I liked this a lot and was very well written. 'Judgement can be bagged up in little zip locks' I liked that line the best.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: ToTaLiTaRiaNiSM iN DeSTRuCTioN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:00:33 PM AEST
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Hmn. I forgot you had another alias, Lindsey. Caught this trawling the war topic forum.

Apart from having the dubious distinction of having attracted a comment with the term 'anal rape' and the image of Barbara Bush in the same line, this has all the hallmarks of an excellently vocal denial of stupidity in the hands of the elite.

I don't hate Bush. I don't hate america, either. I hate the neo-conservative ethos that accommodates itself so well into its corporate culture.

Well said. I like it.




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