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Array ( [sid] => 46852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gone [time] => 2004-05-10 00:10:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Gone...!

Life is so damn wrong,
Why can't anyone see?
I hate this life now u see?
Please someone help me!

My life’s coming to an end,
It's gone way to far already I swear,
How can people live in this world?
My life is screwed there's no repair!

At long last it’s the end
Which way I die I’ll decide
But defiantly I’m a goner,
I’m sorry I promise I tried!

This world is a damn hell,
All the people you thought,
Were your friends what a joke?
These pills to end it all I bought!

At night I see it in my dreams,
Through the day I feel its close,
There’s no way I can escape it now,
To die I will after I take this dose!

I feel the blood rush through me,
As I slip down these pills,
And as they slowly take control
Finally this pain they will kill!

Slowly I slip from this world,
Into the darkness my body seeps,
I feel my self slowly turning cold,
My heartbeat takes its final leap!
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 36 [informant] => bite_me [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Gone

Contributed by bite_me on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 12:10:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Gone...!

Life is so damn wrong,
Why can't anyone see?
I hate this life now u see?
Please someone help me!

My life’s coming to an end,
It's gone way to far already I swear,
How can people live in this world?
My life is screwed there's no repair!

At long last it’s the end
Which way I die I’ll decide
But defiantly I’m a goner,
I’m sorry I promise I tried!

This world is a damn hell,
All the people you thought,
Were your friends what a joke?
These pills to end it all I bought!

At night I see it in my dreams,
Through the day I feel its close,
There’s no way I can escape it now,
To die I will after I take this dose!

I feel the blood rush through me,
As I slip down these pills,
And as they slowly take control
Finally this pain they will kill!

Slowly I slip from this world,
Into the darkness my body seeps,
I feel my self slowly turning cold,
My heartbeat takes its final leap!

Copyright © bite_me ... [ 2004-05-10 00:10:07]
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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 12:21:28 AM AEST
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I don't have answers to how we choose and why. You say you want to die, and take pills....I am sitting here doing that very thing...taking pills not to die...but to stretch out every ounce of life I can. I wake daily to see an image in the mirror that changes nightly.

I have use of one hand, and sight is failing, on oxygen now unable to be mobile, and in constant physical pain.

Still I have to try to stretch out every ounce no mater how much the pain cripples me. I hate pain, but most of all I strive to have just one more day to look into my sons eyes and smile at him and tell him my God you are my most precioous gift, I love you so very much, and I worry about how life will be for him. I do want to hold his baby in my arms and see the love and know there is another generation to this link.....I will nwver get to do that....but I must strive to stretch out every ounce of life I can. This life is no granted wish, but a gift, I came to this site of poetry, it is a medicine to the soul and many angels abide here.

Stick around and give it a try...it helps me get through every night. Welcome to my world, hope you can meet the angels who keep me going.

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