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Array ( [sid] => 46959 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Last Beginning [time] => 2004-05-10 18:48:22 [hometext] => You think your good.... Your not. You think your nice..... Your not. You think your liked..... Your not. I learned this the hard way, Make sure you don't.--Caesar [bodytext] => Death Death Death and the Meth and the cuts
The Love the hugs, punch in the guts.
Thunder rolls, back of my head
Heart is weighed down, feels like lead.
Try to cover new slice on my arm.
Finally done, no more self harm.
Give me hug, squeeze me tight.
May be the last time we say goodnight.
All this I want you to know.
That I will always love you so.
That I meant everything good,
I would stay if I could.
Wish you could stay forever with me.
Obviously it was not meant to be.
Physically or not, I'm here for you.
And your love I will continue to pursue.
Our friendship will never truly end,
for it's our ageless relationship that they can't comprehend. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 13 [informant] => BinkCaesar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Last Beginning

Contributed by BinkCaesar on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 06:48:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Death Death Death and the Meth and the cuts
The Love the hugs, punch in the guts.
Thunder rolls, back of my head
Heart is weighed down, feels like lead.
Try to cover new slice on my arm.
Finally done, no more self harm.
Give me hug, squeeze me tight.
May be the last time we say goodnight.
All this I want you to know.
That I will always love you so.
That I meant everything good,
I would stay if I could.
Wish you could stay forever with me.
Obviously it was not meant to be.
Physically or not, I'm here for you.
And your love I will continue to pursue.
Our friendship will never truly end,
for it's our ageless relationship that they can't comprehend.

Copyright © BinkCaesar ... [ 2004-05-10 18:48:22]
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Re: The Last Beginning (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:03:56 PM AEST
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This is a very deep poem Caesar. I think you did a wonderful job. Keep up the good work. I loved it! -Stace-

Re: The Last Beginning (User Rating: 1 )
by PaperCut on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:24:35 PM AEST
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aw bink! i cant help but feel that im continually causing your pain and it hurts me. i dont like seeing you upset and i really want you to be happy. although the cuts are gorgeous, you get hurt too often and i worry aboot you alot....
please be careful *hug*

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