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Hot was the weather-cold was my friend,
He & I together, had this peculiar trend
To hold hands and tiptoe in the burning sand,
Our chortling would spread across the whole land.

Little children would laugh heartily,
‘Young adults’ carousing, a kind of perversity,
For we would sneak off, with their clothing and shoes,
While they reveled merrily in the pool.

Little they were, and shyness was distant;
Pursuing our tracks, fully naked,
Dancing behind us, a nudist colony,
Enjoying the pursue, we ran, jovially!

Hot was the weather-cold was my friend,
As I recall the past times we spent,
Cold he is, cold as can be,
In his grave, having fun without me.

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Eccentric Freinds

Contributed by Thivanka on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:48:35 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Eccentric Friends.

Hot was the weather-cold was my friend,
He & I together, had this peculiar trend
To hold hands and tiptoe in the burning sand,
Our chortling would spread across the whole land.

Little children would laugh heartily,
‘Young adults’ carousing, a kind of perversity,
For we would sneak off, with their clothing and shoes,
While they reveled merrily in the pool.

Little they were, and shyness was distant;
Pursuing our tracks, fully naked,
Dancing behind us, a nudist colony,
Enjoying the pursue, we ran, jovially!

Hot was the weather-cold was my friend,
As I recall the past times we spent,
Cold he is, cold as can be,
In his grave, having fun without me.

-Thivanka

Copyright Â© Thivanka ... [ 2004-05-11 02:48:35]
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Re: Eccentric Freinds (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:05:43 AM AEST
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Good poem extremely well written. Thanks foa very good read.

Re: Eccentric Freinds (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:25:01 AM AEST
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Aah..what a happy walk on burning sands..no problem when there is a good friend..lol.. well written..really a good read. venkat

Re: Eccentric Freinds (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:14:04 AM AEST
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Good write..good read...
Very well done!
Greetz,
Hur

Re: Eccentric Freinds (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:57:45 AM AEST
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this poem is e x c e l l e n t, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Eccentric Freinds (User Rating: 1 )
by Mihiri on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 10:47:47 AM AEST
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Good stuff! Very nicely written! [Hondata vachana amunala]! lol!! C ya l8er! Luv, Mihiri

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