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Array ( [sid] => 47051 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Distance...what a pain in the ass [time] => 2004-05-11 11:16:28 [hometext] => to a friend who i only wish could be more as we both feel the same but yet it cannot be. please enjoy! [bodytext] => The feelings I have for you budding so swiftly.
Wanting you to just hold me so badly.
My desires are what you say you desire also.
You don’t seem to be scared to show.

You used the three words,
With such meaning that causes me to move onwards.
I say them back with emotion surging around my body.
Making me feel all cuddly.

Our only serious problem for not being together,
Is distance, but you are my heart’s captor.
I don’t want anyone else to take this spot that I’m held dear.
I never want you to suddenly disappear.

My heart always rejoices when I talk to you.
I don’t feel so down and blue.
So imagine the effect of one kiss.
I would be in total bliss.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 2 [informant] => little_genna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Distance...what a pain in the ass

Contributed by little_genna on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:16:28 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The feelings I have for you budding so swiftly.
Wanting you to just hold me so badly.
My desires are what you say you desire also.
You don’t seem to be scared to show.

You used the three words,
With such meaning that causes me to move onwards.
I say them back with emotion surging around my body.
Making me feel all cuddly.

Our only serious problem for not being together,
Is distance, but you are my heart’s captor.
I don’t want anyone else to take this spot that I’m held dear.
I never want you to suddenly disappear.

My heart always rejoices when I talk to you.
I don’t feel so down and blue.
So imagine the effect of one kiss.
I would be in total bliss.

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-05-11 11:16:28]
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Re: Distance...what a pain in the ass (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:46:58 PM AEST
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wow i can relate to this...i understand you express this feeling so well i love the way it starts of complex and ens simpley in ryhme it explaines your love

Re: Distance...what a pain in the ass (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:59:24 PM AEST
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distance, heh - i have a story on that thing! tis a pain, but you deal with it i guess, nice write! ;0)
~Remy~

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