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Array ( [sid] => 47100 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Walking At Night [time] => 2004-05-11 17:34:38 [hometext] => Walking At Night [bodytext] => Your lips are cherry red
Hold my hand as we walk on ahead
Skipping around dwellings, passing past streetlights
Is it me or does the moon look extra white

This grey castles’ been burnt and built back
But its still here back on track
As we sit over looking at the sea
You’re tired I can tell when you’re staring at me

Red eyed but so alive
We’re in our prime too young to die
But we’re so scared now
As we look to the cloud

You ask the first star something
Your lips hovering on your whispers
You smile; we leave to climb up the hill
To hug the streets and pull the moon just a little closer still [comments] => 5 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Overstated [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Walking At Night

Contributed by Overstated on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:34:38 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Your lips are cherry red
Hold my hand as we walk on ahead
Skipping around dwellings, passing past streetlights
Is it me or does the moon look extra white

This grey castles’ been burnt and built back
But its still here back on track
As we sit over looking at the sea
You’re tired I can tell when you’re staring at me

Red eyed but so alive
We’re in our prime too young to die
But we’re so scared now
As we look to the cloud

You ask the first star something
Your lips hovering on your whispers
You smile; we leave to climb up the hill
To hug the streets and pull the moon just a little closer still

Copyright Â© Overstated ... [ 2004-05-11 17:34:38]
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Re: Walking At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_facing_judgement on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:09:32 PM AEST
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this is really sweet

Re: Walking At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:23:39 PM AEST
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Very pretty and sweet in every sense of the word. I love it. Bravo and encore.
Love,
Chelsea

Re: Walking At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:15:53 PM AEST
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well written. very nice.

Re: Walking At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 08:18:53 PM AEST
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"To hug the streets and pull the moon just a little closer still",sealed with a kiss.I like your style,it's very different,very interesting to read.
PumpkinPie

Re: Walking At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:15:10 AM AEST
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it's a very beautiful poem! i love it when you aout her lips as "cherry red" it catured her and made me want to read more... great write!

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