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Favorite Sesame Street character
Is Bert, doing the crazy chicken dance
Does it hurt?

Free as a late-night streaker
Free like a skydiver without a
Parachute, you are a bird in the sky
Free from all worry, all responsibility

Smelling the flesh mixed with asphalt smoke
I fall to my knees, feeling the tears streak
Down my face. The flames reaching for me
So intense. Rain falls lightly, drowning me

Today’s your fifth birthday, over your grave
I weep remembering your bright smile
That felt like a bear hug. Guide me now,
Little Sis, and be with me forever and always

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Missing You

Contributed by TheRaven on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:27:49 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Watch you twirling in that skirt
Favorite Sesame Street character
Is Bert, doing the crazy chicken dance
Does it hurt?

Free as a late-night streaker
Free like a skydiver without a
Parachute, you are a bird in the sky
Free from all worry, all responsibility

Smelling the flesh mixed with asphalt smoke
I fall to my knees, feeling the tears streak
Down my face. The flames reaching for me
So intense. Rain falls lightly, drowning me

Today’s your fifth birthday, over your grave
I weep remembering your bright smile
That felt like a bear hug. Guide me now,
Little Sis, and be with me forever and always

-The Raven

Copyright Â© TheRaven ... [ 2004-05-11 23:27:49]
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Re: Missing You (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:26:11 AM AEST
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heya kwags! this is a sad one, luv ya talk to ta later

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:45:55 AM AEST
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started out rather different but ended sadly.
i loved this write. i really like how you wrote it as well. perfectly done. keep it up.
Arden

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:14:04 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes.

I am truly sorry for your loss.

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:36:36 AM AEST
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That, my friend, is powerful poetry !

Naz ~

Re: Missing You (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 03:05:01 PM AEST
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SO SAD- UNEXPECTEDLY- SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS

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