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Array ( [sid] => 47222 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicidle Edge [time] => 2004-05-12 16:29:57 [hometext] => A poem to explain how I felt the first time I felt depression. [bodytext] => Putting the blade against your skin,
Feeling the warmth of your blood flow within,
Praying for the courage to press down deep,
Wanting to fall out of this world into a strong sleep,
Dreaming into a fantasy land,
Somewhere with the bluest sea and the yellowist sand,
Waking up to this world of pain,
Looking for just one person to be sane,
The blade slicing your skin,
This time maybe you'll win,
Blood dripping down your arm,
Hearing nothing but silence, everything's calm,
People push,
People shuv,
This suicide isn't for love,
This is the suicidal edge. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 48 [informant] => XxPerfectlySanexX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Suicidle Edge

Contributed by XxPerfectlySanexX on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:29:57 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Putting the blade against your skin,
Feeling the warmth of your blood flow within,
Praying for the courage to press down deep,
Wanting to fall out of this world into a strong sleep,
Dreaming into a fantasy land,
Somewhere with the bluest sea and the yellowist sand,
Waking up to this world of pain,
Looking for just one person to be sane,
The blade slicing your skin,
This time maybe you'll win,
Blood dripping down your arm,
Hearing nothing but silence, everything's calm,
People push,
People shuv,
This suicide isn't for love,
This is the suicidal edge.

Copyright © XxPerfectlySanexX ... [ 2004-05-12 16:29:57]
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Re: Suicidle Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:34:54 PM AEST
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Wow, this is harsh, great job though!

Re: Suicidle Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by honeyrain on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:54:48 PM AEST
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UHM....im lovin your poetry. I see that when you feelin physically and mentally drained you write powerful poetry.

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Putting the blade against your skin,
Feeling the warmth of your blood flow within,
Praying for the courage to press down deep,
Wanting to fall out of this world into a strong sleep,
Dreaming into a fantasy land,
Somewhere with the bluest sea and the yellowist sand

Re: Suicidle Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by burdened on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 05:35:05 PM AEST
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yes. depression sucks.
i can relate.
honestly.
it's a wonderful poem.

Re: Suicidle Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by bite_me on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 08:28:12 PM AEST
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W o W! Nicely written, yer depression is terrible ay, i can relate perfectly to it, i get depressed alot, very nicely written though!!!

*hugz*

Ella

Re: Suicidle Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by NirvanaLotus on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 07:15:37 PM AEST
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love the harsh beuty of this poem. i love how you write about this subject

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