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Wheat Toast will Spiral
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:25:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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This is another feeble attempt, another
try
me on for size, this
thought, I
thought this
might work a little mintier, a little
Smoother, Orange Julius
Take this cup now; ask
for a refill,
my spirit, my soul is broken.
Like glass then
I fragment,
what they meant
i see...
now i am spinning for you
12 frames
animation
this fluid location
and flowing sensation
floating elevation
red balloons drifting by...
This is another desperate try,
before my toes curl
and smile
(the garlic will rise
to forty-six feet,
and)
wheat toast
will spiral my vision...
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-05-13 01:25:09]
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Re: Wheat Toast will Spiral
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:47:00 AM AEST
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| Good stuff! |
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Re: Wheat Toast will Spiral
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:57:36 AM AEST
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| what i *****in love about your poems are the way i can read each line and maybe not understand the exact meaning but i can interpret it in my own perspective :D awesom! |
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Re: Wheat Toast will Spiral
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:26:06 AM AEST
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| im not quite sure i understand this... it has a good flow though..well at least to me anyway. phil |
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