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That old confusion
Has struck again,
How annoying
The waiting, expecting.

I never thought I’d see the day,
When again the years
Would slip away.

Spring returns to a faltering step,
Has the keeper become the kept? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 270 [topic] => 24 [informant] => spike [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 40 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Awakening

Contributed by spike on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:04:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

That old confusion
Has struck again,
How annoying
The waiting, expecting.

I never thought I’d see the day,
When again the years
Would slip away.

Spring returns to a faltering step,
Has the keeper become the kept?

Copyright Â© spike ... [ 2004-05-13 04:04:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Awakening (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:51:30 AM AEST
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i enjoyed reading this one...
i liked it because of it's flow and simplicity..
well simple in words but very complicated emotionally-wise...

brilliant work!!!

keep it up!

13 year old girl who loves reading other people's work so much she's rejecting her own education for it,
Katie

Re: Awakening (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 01:17:57 PM AEST
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I like the rythem in this poem. it flows so well top marks

bernard.

Re: Awakening (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 02:02:03 PM AEST
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Ya shot that arrow to the heart
of one, so calm 'n' so alone,
not keen on complicatin'
this life 'neath cupid's stone.

SUPERBLY BRILLIANT, Mr. cranky.

cowboy

Re: Awakening (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 01:56:11 AM AEST
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Another exceptional glimpse into the heart of sweeping emotion.
Hard to control and damaging, we embrace all things, regardless!

Dealing with appreciation for our enjoyment of all things can be (at
the best of times) daunting. Your work quite often makes the
reader feel as if they were all alone, together, (if that makes sense)

Your writing always captures truth in living, S. Like watching
a movie with no particular genre, but emotionally encompassing
all.

Bravo!!

~ Breezy

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