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Array ( [sid] => 4741 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2002-10-08 07:30:00 [hometext] => I wote this because of the corruption if the music industry and how it is now no longer about making music, but making money. [bodytext] => Bloodshot eyes
Mark a night of crying
Gut-wrenching screams
Mark a day of dying

All in my head
The memories crumble
Of who I once was
Daring, yet humble

I once possessed glory
I once possessed fame
Now I lie here bleeding,
Full of shame

Music was once my everything
Now it's become my death
It all recedes from me
With this last breath

The soothing melodies
I once produced
Now sit on the shelves
Without a use

Such irony, once unimaginable
The satire of it all
The only thing left
is the final fall

Goodbye MTV
Sayanara VH1
my sound
you no longer need

Just don't do a behind the music,
that's all I plead
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Contributed by zeppchic420 on Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Bloodshot eyes
Mark a night of crying
Gut-wrenching screams
Mark a day of dying

All in my head
The memories crumble
Of who I once was
Daring, yet humble

I once possessed glory
I once possessed fame
Now I lie here bleeding,
Full of shame

Music was once my everything
Now it's become my death
It all recedes from me
With this last breath

The soothing melodies
I once produced
Now sit on the shelves
Without a use

Such irony, once unimaginable
The satire of it all
The only thing left
is the final fall

Goodbye MTV
Sayanara VH1
my sound
you no longer need

Just don't do a behind the music,
that's all I plead

Copyright © zeppchic420 ... [ 2002-10-08 07:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 07:42:22 PM AEST
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interesting view, yet almost everyone in this world has a motivation for money, power, or control.

Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by mikeyd on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:47:29 PM AEST
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i understand where you are coming. and i like the strong images.

but don't people always talk about which bills they have to pay, or how much this/that costs? the world relays on money, and if they didn't make money, they wouldn't be able to bring the public Music. so it's a rather controversial topic..Music!

Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by BobbyZimmerman on Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 07:15:26 PM AEST
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Wow, excellent post...I am coincidentally writing this to you on the day Keith Moon died. I don't think Kurt could have said it better himself.

Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Chaoticchick on Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 02:10:35 AM AEST
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this should be a punk rock song! ;)

Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by TOMH on Thursday, 26th November 2009 @ 03:30:10 AM AEST
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I AM SORRY TO SAY YOR POEM IS SAD BUT TRUE IN MANY CASES. I WILL OFFER MY POEM SEARCHIN AS A COUNTER. TOM H

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