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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => You Don't Care!
[time] => 2004-05-13 20:58:56
[hometext] => My mother urks me. I can't help, but be angry.
[bodytext] => You don't care
about the way I feel,
all you care about
is yourself.
How can I call you
my mother?
You insult me
when you're here
and you cry on
the phone,
when you're home.
I don't understand
you at times,
you say you love me,
but hardly come around
to visit.
I have never,
in my life,
said anything bad
about you,
so why do it to me?
You are a very
mean person.
You know?
The world doesn't
revolve around you.
You don't care about me,
you're one mean,
nasty witch,
I'm only telling the truth.
Part of me
loves you,
another part
just tells me,
to tell you to
go to Hell,
I don't want you
in my life anymore.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.3/2003
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 162
[topic] => 6
[informant] => Cynthia
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => AngryPoetry
)
You Don't Care!
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:58:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You don't care
about the way I feel,
all you care about
is yourself.
How can I call you
my mother?
You insult me
when you're here
and you cry on
the phone,
when you're home.
I don't understand
you at times,
you say you love me,
but hardly come around
to visit.
I have never,
in my life,
said anything bad
about you,
so why do it to me?
You are a very
mean person.
You know?
The world doesn't
revolve around you.
You don't care about me,
you're one mean,
nasty witch,
I'm only telling the truth.
Part of me
loves you,
another part
just tells me,
to tell you to
go to Hell,
I don't want you
in my life anymore.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.3/2003
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-05-13 20:58:56]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: You Don't Care!
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:03:17 PM AEST
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Ouch.. I'm sorry you feel this way.... I hope you can patch things up with her.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: You Don't Care!
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by JennyFruFru on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:06:17 PM AEST
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| my mother used to tell me i wasnt going to amount to anything in life when i was a little girl.. then when i was little all i wanted to do was cheer.. and she was like your not built to be a cheerleader... it hurt me so bad.. well ill tell u one thing i got the best of her... made captain of my high school varisty squad took my squad to counties and won!!! i designed the whole routine with help from my co captain... i know how u feel part of you loves her cuz shes your mom but part of you wants her to leave you alone since she has done so much to u........ :) :) :) |
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Re: You Don't Care!
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:11:16 PM AEST
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Wow. I just love the way you've depicted that awful feeling when you feel torn between love and hate for someone . . . . it hurts especially when the 'someone' is your mother and you're definitely not alone, for whatever that's worth. Cyber hugs for your feelings and cyber flowers for your poem both being sent your way :).
--Nora |
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Re: You Don't Care!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:16:16 PM AEST
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I am so sorry that you have to be torn like that. Some people are just naturally insentive to others feelings. Try to ignore the bad, as hard as it is to do, and just remember she is your mom and you do have love for her. You be the bigger of the two.
Hugs sweetie,
Rita |
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Re: You Don't Care!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:42:12 PM AEST
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| and now you know how I feel, adn what two of my poems were refering to. Needess to say this one touched me. |
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Re: You Don't Care!
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:10:47 AM AEST
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THAT'S SO SAD DEAR! MY MOM NEVER CARED MUCH ABOUT ME EITHER!! I KNOW HOW IT FEELS & IT SUCKS!!! MINE MOVED DOWN TO LITTLE ROCK,AR. WITH MY SO CALLED OLDEST BROTHER!!!! MAYBE YOU'RE BETTER OFF NOT TALKING TO EACHOTHER DEAR!!!!! ALL I KNOW IS SHE'S MISSING ALOT BY NOT BEING A MOTHER TO YOU-A GREAT DAUGHTER,OR YOUR CHILDREN WHICH ARE HE GRAND CHILDREN!!!!!!! SMILE,WE ALL HERE LOVE YOU & YOUR POEMS!!!!!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: You Don't Care!
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by venkat on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:32:30 AM AEST
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| I know this feeling..as long as she behaves like a self centred woman..you need not care her..if she annoys you mercilessly.. better avoid her at least for the present..Venkat |
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Re: You Don't Care!
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:36:21 PM AEST
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Wow, this is so sad and heart breaking.
Written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: You Don't Care!
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by arden on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:39:21 PM AEST
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wow i sure can relate to this.
i know what your feeling. i loath my mother with every fiber in my being.
this is sad though.
powerful write.
i liked it :)
Arden |
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