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[aid] => mick
[title] => My Scar
[time] => 2004-05-14 09:03:14
[hometext] => This One I wrote while i was being mocked at school
[bodytext] => This runs deeper and deeper with everyone that passes; it hurts me so much that I can no longer bear it. I just want this pain to end. I can’t go on; I just have to end it. End the pain that plagues my heart every day and night. I wish I did not feel this pain, but now’s the time to end it end it for ever and ever.
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My Scar
Contributed by
Seikjo
on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:03:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This runs deeper and deeper with everyone that passes; it hurts me so much that I can no longer bear it. I just want this pain to end. I can’t go on; I just have to end it. End the pain that plagues my heart every day and night. I wish I did not feel this pain, but now’s the time to end it end it for ever and ever.
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Re: My Scar
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:05:52 AM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL EXPRESSION OF THE SUFFERING OF YOUR SOUL
HOPE IT GETS BETTER
PLEASE READ MY SIGNATURE-
KAHLIL GIBRAN STATES IT BEST- |
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Re: My Scar
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by infinitea on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 12:18:11 PM AEST
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dont let your soul become defeated
by heartless bastards who's minds are depleted of any common sense.
untense. start living outside the box. |
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Re: My Scar
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by Princesaazul16 on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:01:34 PM AEST
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| I understand how you feel. I go through the same thing every day. And it hurts, it starts to get to you. Well if you ever want to talk..i'm here. Keep up the good work! ~Stace~ |
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Re: My Scar
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:23:46 PM AEST
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I do like this, but work on setting up your poetry with some lines in between, it would just make it a little easier to read. And second, why do you care what people at school think? You only need to be stuck with them for so long before you never have to see or hear from them again. So don't waste your time hurting yourself if it's over that.
Katie |
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