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Array ( [sid] => 47569 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DESPERATE PRAYER [time] => 2004-05-14 23:19:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Desperate Prayer

Life is reeping havic on my soul,nothing to do,no
where to go.Lost in a world on borrowed time,nothing to
venture,nothing to find.What should I do,I feel so
hollow,I can not breath,I can not swallow.Another case
of forgoten soul.when will I leave,I do not know.I try to
make better,and only do worse.Im stuck living life under
a curse.Please help me my lord,for you are the one.I
will follow the words,of you and your son.
I know my words are so hard to believe,but trust me my
lord my heart still bleeds.I ask for no favors,just to be
at ease,A chance to do better and you will see.please
hear my cry,I'm crying its true.Please here my cry,I'm
crying for you.I need your help,I beg you my lord,I am
below you,begging you for support.I've run out of words
now,nothing more can I say,Please help me get through
these weary days.
T.West [comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 48 [informant] => twesten [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

DESPERATE PRAYER

Contributed by twesten on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:19:03 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Desperate Prayer

Life is reeping havic on my soul,nothing to do,no
where to go.Lost in a world on borrowed time,nothing to
venture,nothing to find.What should I do,I feel so
hollow,I can not breath,I can not swallow.Another case
of forgoten soul.when will I leave,I do not know.I try to
make better,and only do worse.Im stuck living life under
a curse.Please help me my lord,for you are the one.I
will follow the words,of you and your son.
I know my words are so hard to believe,but trust me my
lord my heart still bleeds.I ask for no favors,just to be
at ease,A chance to do better and you will see.please
hear my cry,I'm crying its true.Please here my cry,I'm
crying for you.I need your help,I beg you my lord,I am
below you,begging you for support.I've run out of words
now,nothing more can I say,Please help me get through
these weary days.
T.West

Copyright © twesten ... [ 2004-05-14 23:19:03]
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Re: DESPERATE PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 03:55:29 PM AEST
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I'm sorry you feel this way, but so many times I too have felt this way. It never seems like it will end, but it does. Hang in there....He'll help!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: DESPERATE PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by Jocelyn on Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 03:26:42 AM AEST
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Rest with him let you hear the whisper of his voice through your heart. God Bless You

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