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Array ( [sid] => 47576 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Story Sealed In [time] => 2004-05-14 23:59:49 [hometext] => Complex but true. You love me. You SAY you love me. But you don't realize it is me. [bodytext] => These tears
Will make up for these emotions
More than hate can do
I am lost in all of our careless desicions
All these tears will make you scream
Make you see all the points in this line
All the lines in this circle
You are searching for what you've already passed
Will you ever reach the horizon?
These tears
On my cheek I am in extreme discomfort
Not from the texture but what they make me realize
They make me see that we are lost
We could never rebuild what I have destroyed
When our feelings bring no smiles
Our ending will never be "Happily Ever After"
I didn't want to do this to you, but i had to
I'm so distant from you, I can hardly breathe
But I still see you and take in what now is sacred
My future is gone from the past I so longed
I'm not close enough to you to feel your warmth
I'm so cold, if I could just have one kiss
Why doesn't anyone else see this?
No more caring eyes
Forever I won't won't keep these lies
These tears
They are my true feelings
All my words are so meaningless
Without you I have no appreciation
I can't feel needed if I'm dying behind you
How can I stay warm
Stay warm!
Why can't you look back?!
I wish I could just steal those sparkling eyes
I'd make you see what brings out me
These tears
No more screaming, no more sound
No more gentle words of carelessness
Take the time to realize the pace of my breathing
See my tears and grasp my neck
Squeeze it out of me, what we both want you to hear
Half of our death was suicide!
These tears
They keep me alive
They show that I strive
I've lost my mind and you're bleeding from my heart [comments] => 1 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 48 [informant] => xx_lovelinehatexx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Story Sealed In

Contributed by xx_lovelinehatexx on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 11:59:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



These tears
Will make up for these emotions
More than hate can do
I am lost in all of our careless desicions
All these tears will make you scream
Make you see all the points in this line
All the lines in this circle
You are searching for what you've already passed
Will you ever reach the horizon?
These tears
On my cheek I am in extreme discomfort
Not from the texture but what they make me realize
They make me see that we are lost
We could never rebuild what I have destroyed
When our feelings bring no smiles
Our ending will never be "Happily Ever After"
I didn't want to do this to you, but i had to
I'm so distant from you, I can hardly breathe
But I still see you and take in what now is sacred
My future is gone from the past I so longed
I'm not close enough to you to feel your warmth
I'm so cold, if I could just have one kiss
Why doesn't anyone else see this?
No more caring eyes
Forever I won't won't keep these lies
These tears
They are my true feelings
All my words are so meaningless
Without you I have no appreciation
I can't feel needed if I'm dying behind you
How can I stay warm
Stay warm!
Why can't you look back?!
I wish I could just steal those sparkling eyes
I'd make you see what brings out me
These tears
No more screaming, no more sound
No more gentle words of carelessness
Take the time to realize the pace of my breathing
See my tears and grasp my neck
Squeeze it out of me, what we both want you to hear
Half of our death was suicide!
These tears
They keep me alive
They show that I strive
I've lost my mind and you're bleeding from my heart




Copyright © xx_lovelinehatexx ... [ 2004-05-14 23:59:49]
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Re: Story Sealed In (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 12:28:30 AM AEST
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This is one I will reread a few more times.
It spoke right to me.
Very very powerful.
Incredible.




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