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Array ( [sid] => 47584 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heaven Or Hell [time] => 2004-05-15 00:57:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I have seen the side of darkness, and I have seen the side of the light.
To tell you the truth, both can scare you with fright.
In darkness there are many things, that will make a man cry,
And in the light there are things to make you want, and not want to die.
In darkness you tend to do things, that you should not,
And in the light, you feel like you're always in the perfect spot.
In the world of darkness, I have hurt many people, with my shallow ways.
So I turned to the light, in hopes of more brighter days.
Most people seem to think that I love the evil side of life,
When in all reality, my life has always been for the light.
I have always had a mind to know that there is a darker world,
As well as a world of light, and at times my life is full of fright.
I wonder what would life be without me, and where would I be.
Would I go to hell, or will I go to heaven,
But one then is for sure, and that is I will always look to the number seven.
I wonder if God has a plan for me, that is really great when I leave this earth,
Or will I just remain in the dirt.
Or what if I was to bad, and went to hell, would I be caged in a flamelit cell.
I would love to go to heaven, and see old friends, and family members,
But then I think of all the ones I leave behind, how would they feel I wonder.
Here on earth a lot of us take one another and a lot of things for granted,
But what would God think come judgement day,
Could you honestly say, that you will not be rejected.
I could say that I have no clue, to what the end holds for me,
But I do pray that I get the chance to see all of heavens beauty.
For I know that if I go to hell, I am for sure to be thrown out anyway.
For I will throw the most hell raising party that the devil has ever seen.
Now in heaven I would love to become an angel, and help all in need,
But if I went to hell, I would most certainly take it over, and make the devil my *****,
For all of eternity.
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Heaven Or Hell

Contributed by Rylo on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 12:57:35 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



I have seen the side of darkness, and I have seen the side of the light.
To tell you the truth, both can scare you with fright.
In darkness there are many things, that will make a man cry,
And in the light there are things to make you want, and not want to die.
In darkness you tend to do things, that you should not,
And in the light, you feel like you're always in the perfect spot.
In the world of darkness, I have hurt many people, with my shallow ways.
So I turned to the light, in hopes of more brighter days.
Most people seem to think that I love the evil side of life,
When in all reality, my life has always been for the light.
I have always had a mind to know that there is a darker world,
As well as a world of light, and at times my life is full of fright.
I wonder what would life be without me, and where would I be.
Would I go to hell, or will I go to heaven,
But one then is for sure, and that is I will always look to the number seven.
I wonder if God has a plan for me, that is really great when I leave this earth,
Or will I just remain in the dirt.
Or what if I was to bad, and went to hell, would I be caged in a flamelit cell.
I would love to go to heaven, and see old friends, and family members,
But then I think of all the ones I leave behind, how would they feel I wonder.
Here on earth a lot of us take one another and a lot of things for granted,
But what would God think come judgement day,
Could you honestly say, that you will not be rejected.
I could say that I have no clue, to what the end holds for me,
But I do pray that I get the chance to see all of heavens beauty.
For I know that if I go to hell, I am for sure to be thrown out anyway.
For I will throw the most hell raising party that the devil has ever seen.
Now in heaven I would love to become an angel, and help all in need,
But if I went to hell, I would most certainly take it over, and make the devil my *****,
For all of eternity.




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Re: Heaven Or Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:06:55 AM AEST
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this is intense Ron seems you have been doing alot of deep thinking. This makes me think deep I didnt think I could get any deeper tonight but now I have. Great job once again. You keep me in awe always

Love ya
Michelle


Re: Heaven Or Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:18:10 AM AEST
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Always look to the light. In the dark you can miss too many good things. You would make a terrific angel. Will you be mine If you happen to get there before me? I will watch for you if I get there first. Right now just take care of our earthly Angel Girl.

Rita


Re: Heaven Or Hell (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 02:40:19 AM AEST
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Yes Baby Always Look To The Light !!!! I'll Have To Agree With Rita 100% You Would Make A Terrific Angel Cause You Are Sweet , Kind, Loving & Caring & Your Always Thinking Of Others Before You Even Think About Yourself !!!!!! You Are My Angel Here On Earth & If You Go To Heaven Before I Do Then Will You Look Out For Me Still? & If I Go Before You Remember If Your Feeling Down & Just Need Someone To Talk To Just Look Up At The Sky & Call My Name I'll Be Right There To Listen Baby !!!!!

Love You Very Much :-)
Hugs & Kisses
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
******************************


Re: Heaven Or Hell (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:12:34 AM AEST
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It makes you think about eternity,which is great.Searching for a hope but falling to the the wrong of where you want to go,puts it into perspective.




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