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Array ( [sid] => 47652 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Flying Away [time] => 2004-05-15 14:59:27 [hometext] => sigh.... why dose this feeling always come back to me..... [bodytext] => Fly away and never come back,
This is my dream,
My will to soar,

Not into death as a suicide,
Just away from here,
Far away,

I dont want to die,
I think so,
Maybe,

I dont know anymore,
I need to be free,
To get away,

Become a bird and fly away,
On feather wings,
Soar away,

Swept away from feeling and humanity,
Been filled with too much pain,
No more,

Maybe I should die,
I dunno,
No,

Each day I cause so many pain,
To the ones I love,
Maybe,

Yes I think I should,
Fly far away,
Gone,

I should die and come to my rest,
Rest my weary soul,
Dieing,

Fly off into death with open eyes,
Say goodbye to you,
My lover,

Suicide sounds like a blessing right now,
It will be,
It is,

I just cant take it anymore,
I wont take it,
Nevermore,

So much pressure killing me deep down,
How can I escape,
You cant,

No notes to wast time with,
Just leave,
Go away,

Leave me hear to die peacefully,
Dont hold me back,
I have to go,

Time will slip past and away,
As I cry one last time,
I go,

Fly away and never come back,
This is my dream,
My will to soar. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Flying Away

Contributed by TwEeK on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 02:59:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Fly away and never come back,
This is my dream,
My will to soar,

Not into death as a suicide,
Just away from here,
Far away,

I dont want to die,
I think so,
Maybe,

I dont know anymore,
I need to be free,
To get away,

Become a bird and fly away,
On feather wings,
Soar away,

Swept away from feeling and humanity,
Been filled with too much pain,
No more,

Maybe I should die,
I dunno,
No,

Each day I cause so many pain,
To the ones I love,
Maybe,

Yes I think I should,
Fly far away,
Gone,

I should die and come to my rest,
Rest my weary soul,
Dieing,

Fly off into death with open eyes,
Say goodbye to you,
My lover,

Suicide sounds like a blessing right now,
It will be,
It is,

I just cant take it anymore,
I wont take it,
Nevermore,

So much pressure killing me deep down,
How can I escape,
You cant,

No notes to wast time with,
Just leave,
Go away,

Leave me hear to die peacefully,
Dont hold me back,
I have to go,

Time will slip past and away,
As I cry one last time,
I go,

Fly away and never come back,
This is my dream,
My will to soar.

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-05-15 14:59:27]
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Re: Flying Away (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 03:52:32 PM AEST
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Wonderfully done! I hope these begin to look up for you! You are a very talented author!

Re: Flying Away (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 05:25:21 PM AEST
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we all have those feelings - some feel it more than others. great read for my whatever my opinion is worth. Keep up the good work.

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