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Array ( [sid] => 4769 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Boast [time] => 2002-10-08 15:10:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => hello mom dad, how are you doing sister sister?
i hope i looked good for the reuinional picture
back and center a beautiful bust background fixture
yes that is me as always a dignified little mister
no other extended family here or so it is said
inlaws unacceptable and all but one grammy is dead
each aunt uncle cousin in another country i read
can't oust your confinement for eleven years fed
straight to me now let me take this opportunity
to more than a pompous a** straight past scrutiny
of all that you have to say is not quite suiting me
say it like i see it i don't need your impunity
it's lunacy for you and me to have a little talk
i've been taking it all my life and now i can walk
in who i am as a man you don't understand my talk
now raised and payed for on an international block

look at you the one's who are supposed to care for me the most
it's useless on the show this is your life when you are the host
and prove this to yourself that you had a part and give a toast
to feel good that you did good like you should so you can boast

you can guess that i gave up trying to even like you
just the same with every action you think i might do
shows me plenty of your interest dark or light truth
it's all pointing back to the fact i won't try to
try this thing called family when it never worked out
i can lived just happily without you in my route
no more screaming crying lying denying in a shout
hope it works than i can figure what this is about
like why in the night can't i sleep and why do i give
and why do people follow when i dont know how to live
and why does every problem i shouldn't have come in
and why do i live this way look this way right again
it never ends but the beginning is coming in sight
of something brand new without you and now i might
delve on in and begin a new life that could be right
in spite of anyone so long as i'm in i will fight

look at you the one's who are supposed to care for me the most
it's useless on the show this is your life when bring out the ghost
and prove this to yourself that you had a part on the glitter coast
to feel good that you did good like you should so you can boast


***
(10/7/02) [comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 13 [informant] => daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Boast

Contributed by daniel on Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 03:10:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



hello mom dad, how are you doing sister sister?
i hope i looked good for the reuinional picture
back and center a beautiful bust background fixture
yes that is me as always a dignified little mister
no other extended family here or so it is said
inlaws unacceptable and all but one grammy is dead
each aunt uncle cousin in another country i read
can't oust your confinement for eleven years fed
straight to me now let me take this opportunity
to more than a pompous a** straight past scrutiny
of all that you have to say is not quite suiting me
say it like i see it i don't need your impunity
it's lunacy for you and me to have a little talk
i've been taking it all my life and now i can walk
in who i am as a man you don't understand my talk
now raised and payed for on an international block

look at you the one's who are supposed to care for me the most
it's useless on the show this is your life when you are the host
and prove this to yourself that you had a part and give a toast
to feel good that you did good like you should so you can boast

you can guess that i gave up trying to even like you
just the same with every action you think i might do
shows me plenty of your interest dark or light truth
it's all pointing back to the fact i won't try to
try this thing called family when it never worked out
i can lived just happily without you in my route
no more screaming crying lying denying in a shout
hope it works than i can figure what this is about
like why in the night can't i sleep and why do i give
and why do people follow when i dont know how to live
and why does every problem i shouldn't have come in
and why do i live this way look this way right again
it never ends but the beginning is coming in sight
of something brand new without you and now i might
delve on in and begin a new life that could be right
in spite of anyone so long as i'm in i will fight

look at you the one's who are supposed to care for me the most
it's useless on the show this is your life when bring out the ghost
and prove this to yourself that you had a part on the glitter coast
to feel good that you did good like you should so you can boast


***
(10/7/02)




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Re: Boast (User Rating: 1 )
by Damon_Maynard on Wednesday, 9th October 2002 @ 03:11:08 PM AEST
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That was very nicely done, nice execution, nice entry to water, little splash...9.4. But... I've found the worst unresolved issues are the ones your head creates, right? Can you hear them yelling "what now?"




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