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[title] => Alas
[time] => 2004-05-16 10:27:37
[hometext] => I've been mute for the last 21 days. this one is just crap. comment if read!
[bodytext] => 7 years, 3 weeks, 14 hours and...Alas! I'm home again. dirty poeple would know this. I was sinking when I had a ball in fist. A page some others list. Well I'm here to fix. To bliss in a place I once missed...Alas! No seconds to the minute. No minute to the hours. Just freverless til this life ends.
No more poetry, no more words. Things are different but things assured. Things are better left to mend the bridges once exposed...Alas! I am man. No longer boy nor toy. I am older, in line for what I must face. Either confrontation or encounterment. I'm better than what I was. And now...Alas! I'm within the reaches I've struggled to See. I'm where I always needed to be.
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Alas
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:27:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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7 years, 3 weeks, 14 hours and...Alas! I'm home again. dirty poeple would know this. I was sinking when I had a ball in fist. A page some others list. Well I'm here to fix. To bliss in a place I once missed...Alas! No seconds to the minute. No minute to the hours. Just freverless til this life ends.
No more poetry, no more words. Things are different but things assured. Things are better left to mend the bridges once exposed...Alas! I am man. No longer boy nor toy. I am older, in line for what I must face. Either confrontation or encounterment. I'm better than what I was. And now...Alas! I'm within the reaches I've struggled to See. I'm where I always needed to be.
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rhei76
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2004-05-16 10:27:37]
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Re: Alas
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by bernard on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:49:00 AM AEST
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I would not say it is crap it seems honest enough, in fact I will give it the top marks.
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Re: Alas
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by LouisaMontagu on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:10:16 AM AEST
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yeah..! I like...
have a kinda song rythem going..
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Re: Alas
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 03:45:38 PM AEST
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Definently not crap.
good work.
luv, huggs,
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