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Array ( [sid] => 47828 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fighter [time] => 2004-05-16 22:18:11 [hometext] => this is about my cousin, Michelle, who died of cancer. she was only 17 years old. PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS. I want to see what others think of my poetry! [bodytext] => You fought for a long time
When I say fight
I don’t mean it in a bad way
You fought for your life, with all your might
You’re such an inspiration
Whenever life gets me down
I think of how strong you were
And then, I’m no longer wearing a frown
I really don’t believe you’re dead
You never will be
You’ll always be alive
Inside of me
I love you, Michelle
You’ll always be in my heart
And in my life
You’ll always play a part
I’ll never forget you
It seems like just yesterday
You left me
But, you know, I’ll join you someday

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Fighter

Contributed by BaByBaNaNa on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:18:11 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You fought for a long time
When I say fight
I don’t mean it in a bad way
You fought for your life, with all your might
You’re such an inspiration
Whenever life gets me down
I think of how strong you were
And then, I’m no longer wearing a frown
I really don’t believe you’re dead
You never will be
You’ll always be alive
Inside of me
I love you, Michelle
You’ll always be in my heart
And in my life
You’ll always play a part
I’ll never forget you
It seems like just yesterday
You left me
But, you know, I’ll join you someday

Copyright © BaByBaNaNa ... [ 2004-05-16 22:18:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fighter (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 10:35:01 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss...This is a lovely tribute to your cousin...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Fighter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:29:00 PM AEST
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Beautiful tribute to her. I know your loss is great, but in her death you learned about inner strength and appreciating life. Those were beautiful legacies she left you.

Rita

Re: Fighter (User Rating: 1 )
by true_poetry_writer on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:31:19 PM AEST
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That is relaly pretty im sorry about your couisn. I know what its like to lose a loved one. God Bless
-kim-

Re: Fighter (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:17:41 PM AEST
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Wow this was really good but I think you should talk about what you guys went though in life before she died or before she found out she had cancer. I am sorry that's a bad thing to face in life. I hope you should by her when she need someone.

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