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Array ( [sid] => 4788 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Isolation [time] => 2002-10-08 21:15:00 [hometext] => The topic of the poem is a tough call, I feel. I write to explain my feelings in hopes that others can relate. I write to help both myself and anyone who reads my work and finds it touching or something of the sort. [bodytext] => All alone.
Hidden in a world
That's spiteful.
Evil
Surrounds me.
And bounds me
To hell.
I'm sinking.
I'm drowning
In the middle
Of a sea of sorrow.
It's sorrow
Only from me
And only for me.
I'm alone.

And the world
Passes me by.
I'm lost now.
In retrospect
I guess I've always been lost.
Wading through
Social disorder,
Neglected,
I wait for
The ravages of the world
To consume me,
And tear me
Limb from limb.
I expect it.
I want it.
I know nothing else.
I'm alone.

Befriended.
Betrayed.
The difference grows vague.
Confusion
Leads to
The acceptance of pain.
I suffer
The ways of the world.
It's hell.
It's twisted.
It's crooked.
Competely ***** up.
I'm broken.
I'm fixed.
I dont know which.
There's no one
To help me.
To tell me
Who I am.
Nobody cares.
I'm alone. [comments] => 10 [counter] => 549 [topic] => 25 [informant] => TheSpiritx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Isolation

Contributed by TheSpiritx on Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 09:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

All alone.
Hidden in a world
That's spiteful.
Evil
Surrounds me.
And bounds me
To hell.
I'm sinking.
I'm drowning
In the middle
Of a sea of sorrow.
It's sorrow
Only from me
And only for me.
I'm alone.

And the world
Passes me by.
I'm lost now.
In retrospect
I guess I've always been lost.
Wading through
Social disorder,
Neglected,
I wait for
The ravages of the world
To consume me,
And tear me
Limb from limb.
I expect it.
I want it.
I know nothing else.
I'm alone.

Befriended.
Betrayed.
The difference grows vague.
Confusion
Leads to
The acceptance of pain.
I suffer
The ways of the world.
It's hell.
It's twisted.
It's crooked.
Competely ***** up.
I'm broken.
I'm fixed.
I dont know which.
There's no one
To help me.
To tell me
Who I am.
Nobody cares.
I'm alone.

Copyright © TheSpiritx ... [ 2002-10-08 21:15:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 05:32:51 PM AEST
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Spiritx, this is wonderfully written...very good poem.. I hope you don't feel this way anymore... You are not alone!!
Jenni

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by Arwen on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:38:42 AM AEST
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*wow*! u've really got a gift for expression. I could actually feel wot u were speaking of. Brilliant piece Spiritx. Hope this phase has passed and you're all better. You very likely have lotsa people out there who love and care for you...even if u can't see it. Mebbe it's just that YOU have turned your back on THEM. I've went thro' this myself at one stage in my life but those feelings evaporated leaving me stronger. Thanx for sharing this with me.

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by RealCrystal on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:30:25 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. I know exactly how you feel.

R.C.

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 08:05:27 AM AEST
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desolation, thats what i felt, not a good feeling, but so well expressed

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:33:21 AM AEST
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this poem touches on feelings that are difficult to express... thay are very personal, so different for many... i can relate to this particular feeling... excellent poem...

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by Searcher on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 11:36:49 AM AEST
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Very exprssive write
Can surely relate
Good read

Searcher

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 01:45:01 PM AEST
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Easy to relate to. Good way with words

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 10:03:43 AM AEST
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Wonderful. Definitely can relate to it. Thank you for sharing. You have a great way with words!
Saira

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:42:28 AM AEST
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I know this feeling. The only One who ever broke through it for me was Christ.
Good write.
Stitch

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 12:46:25 PM AEST
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wow,you put alot of heart into this,thanks for sharing,you got a wonderful talent,use it well

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