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Without
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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life without sight faith without reason pain without tears fight without end sleep without peace
bleed without pain feel without breath scream without sound cry without love crawl without earth
breathe without you earth without me die without.
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Luinil
... [
2004-05-17 15:09:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Without
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:12:55 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net....
This is a lovely concept...Like your style..
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Re: Without
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dying_angel_2 on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:18:41 PM AEST (User
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I like this a lot carry on this is good work.. |
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Re: Without
(User Rating: 1 ) by reilt on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:33:37 PM AEST (User
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this is great...i really liked it...welcome* |
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Re: Without
(User Rating: 1 ) by Merry on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:10:23 PM AEST (User
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welcome to this wild and crazy place. Your poem is full of deep feelings - nicely written - keep up the good work
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merry |
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