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Array ( [sid] => 48055 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can’t Escape. [time] => 2004-05-18 11:23:17 [hometext] => I’m not recommending self-harm to any one!! This is just about how it helps me release what i've bottled up... [bodytext] => When I lock my doors, it all comes down on me.
And all the hurts my head, it drives me into insanity.

Sometimes I see disturbing pictures,
From the depths of my darkest dreams,
I guess they’re not there really,
But it isn’t always as it seems.
But I ain’t some weirdo!!
And they only come in night mares,
It’s the bully’s them-selves,
That really makes me scared!!!
With their threats and their laughter,
Things echo through my head.
“Slut you’re gonna get battered”,
That was written, and in different words said.
___________________________________

So I open my doors,
And slit my skin.
At first it mucks me up emotionally,
And for days after every thing spins.
But the difference between to two,
Is that I don’t get mucked dreams.
And I don’t get little images,
Where happy things turn to screams!!!
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 625 [topic] => 60 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => (Poem edited by Mod_11. Please stick to site rules) [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Can’t Escape.

Contributed by deathdrop on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:23:17 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

When I lock my doors, it all comes down on me.
And all the hurts my head, it drives me into insanity.

Sometimes I see disturbing pictures,
From the depths of my darkest dreams,
I guess they’re not there really,
But it isn’t always as it seems.
But I ain’t some weirdo!!
And they only come in night mares,
It’s the bully’s them-selves,
That really makes me scared!!!
With their threats and their laughter,
Things echo through my head.
“Slut you’re gonna get battered”,
That was written, and in different words said.
___________________________________

So I open my doors,
And slit my skin.
At first it mucks me up emotionally,
And for days after every thing spins.
But the difference between to two,
Is that I don’t get mucked dreams.
And I don’t get little images,
Where happy things turn to screams!!!

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-05-18 11:23:17]
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Re: Can’t Escape. (User Rating: 1 )
by krisseee on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:25:42 AM AEST
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wish i was allowed to swear, because this would get some harsh words. see a psychiatrist

Re: Can’t Escape. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:37:32 AM AEST
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i liked it. you expressed yourself well. it's good to get feelings like these out. i'm not sure how whoever posted the other comment thought they were helping but i just wanted to say that your not alone. i know how you feel. life sucks sometimes but never give up.

Re: Can’t Escape. (User Rating: 1 )
by aaaka on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:01:56 PM AEST
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When life deals you lemons make lemonade. Keep on making your lemonade. Put it on paper. Release your anger. It will payoff one day. Good writing. people are always trying to make others insecure because of their own insecurities.

Re: Can’t Escape. (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:25:20 PM AEST
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this is really meaningful. i think it's a beautiful poem

Re: Can’t Escape. (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:33:28 PM AEST
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that last stanza hit me hard. i can relate, its something i do i always regret afterwards, yet when i cant take it i always do it. thx for sharing x

Re: Can’t Escape. (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:47:13 PM AEST
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stong. very strong. no one really deserves to get called things like that. good way of describing how u feel!

Re: Can’t Escape. (User Rating: 1 )
by tinkbaby101 on Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 02:30:07 PM AEST
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i liked it. wish i had read it sooner it woul have helped me when i felt like the world was collaspsing

Re: Can’t Escape. (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 06:02:02 AM AEST
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Wow! Such a tortured, lost soul.
As another member commented, "keep making lemonade", I hope you are well,
and wish you great things....
Luv Last Star x x x

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