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Awakening
Contributed by
jan
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Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:11:02 PM in AEST
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oops
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The sun stood still on Derry Hill
Across the Irish sea
The trees, the lakes and stones pass time
Waiting... just for me
Ancient cross does bear the way
for the silent soul to pass
Stars in heaven will look away
As the future becomes the past
Travel on a band of time
Not knowing where to go
But call to me... they do say
Look here, look here lost soul
Beginnings end and ends begin
Then start the dream once again
Northern Morning calls to me
From far across the Irish Sea
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2004-05-18 14:11:02]
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Re: Awakening
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by cheech on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:16:13 PM AEST
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~~~~~~WOW~~~~~~very much interesting,i really like the way u worded this 1,it was tramendisley well written
Cheech
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Re: Awakening
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:15:10 PM AEST
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this is dreamy... i like dreamy... i like this... man i sound like dr. suess!! lol, good write... ;0)
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