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Just be warned, I may soon cease to be

But don’t you come grovelling at my grave, or think you’re queen of the earth
For I will hate you and rid of you, and you will despise your own birth

I will free you of blood, I will drink from your veins
I will cause you to hurt, I will force upon you these stains

Stains of truth, they will see through you then
And you will hurt as I have, again and again

But I will not let you die, I will not let you follow me
I must keep you suffering, not let you free

You stuck-up cow, who the hell do you think you are?
How dare you tell me how to live my life when you haven’t fallen this far

But wait, don’t despair, for your time is yet to come
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O Sinful Hatred

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:40:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Make a joke, a comment, don’t mind me
Just be warned, I may soon cease to be

But don’t you come grovelling at my grave, or think you’re queen of the earth
For I will hate you and rid of you, and you will despise your own birth

I will free you of blood, I will drink from your veins
I will cause you to hurt, I will force upon you these stains

Stains of truth, they will see through you then
And you will hurt as I have, again and again

But I will not let you die, I will not let you follow me
I must keep you suffering, not let you free

You stuck-up cow, who the hell do you think you are?
How dare you tell me how to live my life when you haven’t fallen this far

But wait, don’t despair, for your time is yet to come

Copyright Â© afraid_of_fear ... [ 2004-05-18 15:40:22]
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Re: O Sinful Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:44:25 PM AEST
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I hope this poem means that you are putting anger ,hatred and ignorance in its place, AWAY from you? This is wrought with emotion, and as all your works,they speak for themselves. Excellent portrayal of your angst.
Keep writing, keep venting...it feeeels good, right??? {{{charlotte}}} :-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: O Sinful Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 03:44:42 PM AEST
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very angry I enjoyed it. I liked the stains of truth part. Keep up the writing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: O Sinful Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:09:18 PM AEST
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oi, strong writing... hope it's fueled in the right direction... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: O Sinful Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:17:37 PM AEST
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Powerful powerful write, one of the best on here. Well done.

Pixie xx

Re: O Sinful Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 03:15:38 PM AEST
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wow like everyone else has said, Powerful!
this was awesome! i love the emotion and the anger.
f*cking sweet girl.
Arden

Re: O Sinful Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:47:12 PM AEST
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Wow, such raw emotion you have placed here Charlotte.
Very dark indeed with much anger and bitterness.
Amazing.

Re: O Sinful Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:43:12 AM AEST
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Wow, Charlotte, that's awesome! You are such an amazing writer! Very angry, i know the feeling, and i can feel it again reading this poem. Great job! I haven't talked to you in soo long! Pm me! *Hugs*
~Lisa

Re: O Sinful Hatred (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:10:52 AM AEST
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ouch!! If this write didnt get the point across to whoever you are mad at they must be deaf and dumb.
Very well done
Roses
Larry

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