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Array ( [sid] => 48145 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loving you [time] => 2004-05-18 20:44:22 [hometext] => i fell strongly about a girl i've loved for many years but she doesnt love me back... So here's a poem ^_^ [bodytext] => I stare at you form a distance
hoping you will someday see me
and learn of my existance

Then i meet you that glorious day
that was the first time i was in love
it was like heaven but i could think of nothing to say

I unveiled my feelings for you on the spot
you gave me an akward look and said
that you'd never love me like i thought

Instead i'd only be a friend to you
that was the only thing you asked from me
those words peirced my heart and even now they still do

So now i know my place in your life
its only to be a friend and nothing more
it feels like i've been stabbed with a knife

So i think to myself was it a waste of time
to go after somthing that wast true
and all the things i said to you i rue because all i had to say was i love you.

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Loving you

Contributed by Dragontear27 on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:44:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I stare at you form a distance
hoping you will someday see me
and learn of my existance

Then i meet you that glorious day
that was the first time i was in love
it was like heaven but i could think of nothing to say

I unveiled my feelings for you on the spot
you gave me an akward look and said
that you'd never love me like i thought

Instead i'd only be a friend to you
that was the only thing you asked from me
those words peirced my heart and even now they still do

So now i know my place in your life
its only to be a friend and nothing more
it feels like i've been stabbed with a knife

So i think to myself was it a waste of time
to go after somthing that wast true
and all the things i said to you i rue because all i had to say was i love you.

Copyright © Dragontear27 ... [ 2004-05-18 20:44:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Loving you (User Rating: 1 )
by aaaka on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:56:26 PM AEST
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pretty good. Sad but pretty good. keep looking there is someone for everyone.

Re: Loving you (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 11:46:45 PM AEST
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wow, great poem, i also knew someone for years like that, only it was slightly different as we went from best friends to planning a whole life together and then he said, 'oh lets be friends, you are unworthy to be my wife' i cannot even stand to talk to him now, i wont, he was so ungenuine to me, hopefully at least you still have a friend in her and i think it is comendable you told your true feelings, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Loving you (User Rating: 1 )
by swiftsouljah on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 04:34:14 PM AEST
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yeah... i know what you mean i have 23 poems about just that

wayne

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