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Array ( [sid] => 48407 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Premonition [time] => 2004-05-20 13:50:35 [hometext] => I snatched up a blank journal at 12:55 AM one night, after an interesting nightmare. Written with black crayon. [bodytext] => Screaming enshrouds even the darkest of tears
Out of the deep come the malicious leers

Against the chilling reality of the black hole
Is the efflorescence of the soul

Confusion stirred into paranoia is the essence of danger
Alienation turns friend into stranger

Reaching out for a better cause
Fights against inevitably unbeatable odds

Close the window to that dark spirit of yours at last
Tonight they're calling for a bloody forecast. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Eve [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Premonition

Contributed by Eve on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:50:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Screaming enshrouds even the darkest of tears
Out of the deep come the malicious leers

Against the chilling reality of the black hole
Is the efflorescence of the soul

Confusion stirred into paranoia is the essence of danger
Alienation turns friend into stranger

Reaching out for a better cause
Fights against inevitably unbeatable odds

Close the window to that dark spirit of yours at last
Tonight they're calling for a bloody forecast.

Copyright © Eve ... [ 2004-05-20 13:50:35]
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Re: Premonition (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 01:54:56 PM AEST
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powerfully attracting. I love the sheer darkness and beauty of this poem. Must've been a scary dream tho. Good Write. Sweet Dreams

Re: Premonition (User Rating: 1 )
by bleeding_chains on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:08:11 PM AEST
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this is a great poem. good write.

Re: Premonition (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 05:14:30 PM AEST
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From the number of quality writes you have, I believe this may be up there, in my opinion, with the best of them.
A previous commentator skimmed the surface when they called it 'sheer darkness', as this elucidates the onset of despair only too well . . .
The title and overall theme are excellent, too.
Great write, overall.

Re: Premonition (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 06:57:52 AM AEST
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"Premonition" is indeed a befitting title, for each passing line instilled a sense of foreboding, an ominous feeling. And for some reason, I can totally picture this written with that black crayon...

Keep writing or be forced to use a yellow crayon,
-V.S.

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