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I look in the mirror and hate what I see, who is that ugly girl staring back at me?
She seems to be laughing and taunting me for all that I've done wrong. I try to run but from myself I cannot hide.
Please believe me, my dear friend, when I say that I care for you and that I love you. I just can't be your helping hand right now.
It pains me to see that after all these years, you still don't know the real me.
Please believe me when I say I'd do anything I could to save you, but you've taken for granted that maybe I'm a little ****** up too and I don't even know how to help you. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Katie2008 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Someone Please Save Me

Contributed by Katie2008 on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:20:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Why does it seem that no one understands me? Why do people look at me like I am a freak?
I look in the mirror and hate what I see, who is that ugly girl staring back at me?
She seems to be laughing and taunting me for all that I've done wrong. I try to run but from myself I cannot hide.
Please believe me, my dear friend, when I say that I care for you and that I love you. I just can't be your helping hand right now.
It pains me to see that after all these years, you still don't know the real me.
Please believe me when I say I'd do anything I could to save you, but you've taken for granted that maybe I'm a little ****** up too and I don't even know how to help you.




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Re: Someone Please Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:24:20 PM AEST
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is anyone truly happy with who they are? im not good poem very emotional


Re: Someone Please Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 08:31:57 PM AEST
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There are people that do understand you, and others looking at you like a freak is an illusion all in your mind. Hell, I do the same thing. You can be your worst enemy without trying, this I know. This write permeates my being with raw emotion and the speaker has really revealed herself. Believe in tomorrow, and be proud of who you are. That's all anyone can ask of you, and you of yourself.


Re: Someone Please Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by EvanJ117 on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:41:55 PM AEST
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this is a good poem. there are paople who understand you. but, can anyone really understand anotherperson? they are two completely different things emotionally.
continue writing please.


Re: Someone Please Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by EvanJ117 on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:48:16 PM AEST
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this is a good poem. there are paople who understand you. but, can anyone really understand anotherperson? they are two completely different things emotionally.
continue writing please.


Re: Someone Please Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:57:47 PM AEST
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Keep the Faith.
Brigther Days ahead


Whisper


Re: Someone Please Save Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Seikjo on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:15:57 PM AEST
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Idoit. That is not about someone saving you are something like that. So stop trying to write poetry, and if your trying to ryme then dont.




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