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Array ( [sid] => 48506 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The fat kid. [time] => 2004-05-21 04:00:36 [hometext] => Tell me what you think of this one please!!! [bodytext] => I cant play sports
I cant run far
A hard time moving
Up and down those stairs

I wishfull thought off what could be
That of which I cant see
I look at me and for I see
The fat kid of which non bare too be

The life of what no one wants
For I have lived and seen
And now I sit and look at me
Of which has changed

Changed for I am sick
Sick of living what cannot be
Cannot be for I wont stand
Stand for living what I dont want
Im not the kid that you used too know

As I look down the path I see myself
Myself as nothing I could have thought
Thought of being of what I want
To be the all star I always want [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 65 [informant] => heartfilledblood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

The fat kid.

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 04:00:36 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I cant play sports
I cant run far
A hard time moving
Up and down those stairs

I wishfull thought off what could be
That of which I cant see
I look at me and for I see
The fat kid of which non bare too be

The life of what no one wants
For I have lived and seen
And now I sit and look at me
Of which has changed

Changed for I am sick
Sick of living what cannot be
Cannot be for I wont stand
Stand for living what I dont want
Im not the kid that you used too know

As I look down the path I see myself
Myself as nothing I could have thought
Thought of being of what I want
To be the all star I always want

Copyright © heartfilledblood ... [ 2004-05-21 04:00:36]
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Re: The fat kid. (User Rating: 1 )
by HOPE4ME2 on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:36:55 AM AEST
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WOW....Thought this was awesome, came from life experience for sure. It's good to read poetry that comes from life experience that all can relate to.

Blessings
HOPE4ME2

Re: The fat kid. (User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:38:54 AM AEST
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In middle school I thought I was the fat kid. It was really difficult. I grew out of my chub but the taunts and jeers still haunt me. I would not wish it on anyone. You conveyed that so well. Wonderful work.

Re: The fat kid. (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:04:19 PM AEST
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=( this makes me really sad..
i dunno what else to say
very good poem

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