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All you like.
But I don’t like you!
Coz you stir things to start a fight!!!

Get a kick do ya?
Out of others misfortunes.
Well you're sick,
In your head.
You’re a twisted *****,
Of different volumes!

Some times you whisper,
To assure no teachers hear.
Other times you never stop.
Until a slap appears.

You’re such a cow.
Your breath is foul.
Your skirt makes you look like a slut.
You’ve never quite had enough…
You don’t comb your hair.
But still your friends care!
They trot about with you.
Like their perfect too.
You’ve polluted their heads.
With you soul of lead.
With your smile of red.
You make people want to be dead...!!!

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You're Not My Friend! You're As Cold As Lead...

Contributed by deathdrop on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 11:05:02 AM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems

You can say you want to, be my friend.
All you like.
But I don’t like you!
Coz you stir things to start a fight!!!

Get a kick do ya?
Out of others misfortunes.
Well you're sick,
In your head.
You’re a twisted *****,
Of different volumes!

Some times you whisper,
To assure no teachers hear.
Other times you never stop.
Until a slap appears.

You’re such a cow.
Your breath is foul.
Your skirt makes you look like a slut.
You’ve never quite had enough…
You don’t comb your hair.
But still your friends care!
They trot about with you.
Like their perfect too.
You’ve polluted their heads.
With you soul of lead.
With your smile of red.
You make people want to be dead...!!!

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-05-21 11:05:02]
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Re: You're Not My Friend! You're As Cold As Lead... (User Rating: 1 )
by TheReturnOfx7 on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 11:29:16 AM AEST
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I know quite a few people like that......its why I eventually accepted an outcast postion and spend my days in the safety of my home, ingoreing the outside world

Re: You're Not My Friend! You're As Cold As Lead... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 02:05:08 PM AEST
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nice venting...it is unfortunate such people exist...but they actually should be pitied for they are the ones who are the losers

Shari

Re: You're Not My Friend! You're As Cold As Lead... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 03:43:25 PM AEST
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"anger anger everywhere
so much pain so much dispair
bring some quiet to my soul
in the words of a song
or a sweet poem"

Re: You're Not My Friend! You're As Cold As Lead... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 05:38:03 PM AEST
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I've known so many people like this one in my life.
Seems they are put there for us who try to be good.......maybe it's our test?
Good poem indeed!
love,
consue

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