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Array ( [sid] => 48579 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I leave you empty handed [time] => 2004-05-21 20:16:04 [hometext] => self explanitory... [bodytext] => "I leave you empty handed"
By: Danielle

I will be there
Whenever
Wherever
With or without,
Your consent
I’ll believe the words you speak
Only because they don’t make me weak
Your arms are severed
You heart broken
Ashamed you are
Because you think I don’t care
Heartbroken and in love
It hurts I’m confused
My conscience spilled over
Ashamed and not there
I’m breathing false air
You’re the only one to care
The statics gone
Our hearts are detached
I’ve got no troubles
Walks through the rubble, of my heart
I know you better then you know yourself
Here with me
You are in love not ashamed
Until I’m gone
Your not the same
You speak the truth even if it hurts
I’m wondering how I fell so hard
And made you sink
I sit so still and try to think
Your song is written
It lays uncomposed
You hurt me with the words you said that night
I’m willing to give you up
If that isn’t all
I’ll leave
Crystal heart
You can see right through
With that radient hue
It fades
I’ve gone away
Your all the way
Inside my head
Making me do every move
I regret
All the things I made your forget
It’s hard
To say I love you when your nervous
And you havent said it in forever
But some how you feel the same
My ashamed conscience
Has gotton out so far
I lay there next to what I think is you
But its only that faded hue

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I leave you empty handed

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 08:16:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



"I leave you empty handed"
By: Danielle

I will be there
Whenever
Wherever
With or without,
Your consent
I’ll believe the words you speak
Only because they don’t make me weak
Your arms are severed
You heart broken
Ashamed you are
Because you think I don’t care
Heartbroken and in love
It hurts I’m confused
My conscience spilled over
Ashamed and not there
I’m breathing false air
You’re the only one to care
The statics gone
Our hearts are detached
I’ve got no troubles
Walks through the rubble, of my heart
I know you better then you know yourself
Here with me
You are in love not ashamed
Until I’m gone
Your not the same
You speak the truth even if it hurts
I’m wondering how I fell so hard
And made you sink
I sit so still and try to think
Your song is written
It lays uncomposed
You hurt me with the words you said that night
I’m willing to give you up
If that isn’t all
I’ll leave
Crystal heart
You can see right through
With that radient hue
It fades
I’ve gone away
Your all the way
Inside my head
Making me do every move
I regret
All the things I made your forget
It’s hard
To say I love you when your nervous
And you havent said it in forever
But some how you feel the same
My ashamed conscience
Has gotton out so far
I lay there next to what I think is you
But its only that faded hue





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Re: I leave you empty handed (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:09:10 PM AEST
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this was amazing to me. i really connect great job and thanks for sharing


Re: I leave you empty handed (User Rating: 1 )
by EvaRee on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 01:43:25 PM AEST
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very nice...i really liked this. I looked you up because of the comment you left on mine...i like your style. Very good job. I know exactly how you feel.
Eva


Re: I leave you empty handed (User Rating: 1 )
by kori31 on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:57:46 PM AEST
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wow! great write- it's like you pulled it out of me- awesome


Re: I leave you empty handed (User Rating: 1 )
by Chimo on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 01:10:13 AM AEST
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That is very good, very powerful


Re: I leave you empty handed (User Rating: 1 )
by Calista on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:03:53 PM AEST
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great great piece Heartbroken and in love...my favorite line good job keep it up
~Calista




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