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Array ( [sid] => 48690 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Is it me? Hell will see... [time] => 2004-05-22 16:17:13 [hometext] => Just listening to NIRVANA inspired this [bodytext] => Time will tell
I sing it loud
Will all be well?
Forsaken souls
reek no benefits of honesty

In this world
Forgotten peace
silly girl
Will be forgotten
If she does not wake up in time

FOR THE JUDGEMENT
is soon
It will be all over
THE END IS EXTREMELY ***** NIGH
good old film quotes
rule the lives of most
Poor ghosts
IT IS YOUR FAULT

Heaven will not take me
Hell i doubt will too
The Devil and God have discussed that
Earth is a greater punishment
Than Hell
Will all be well?
Time will tell

But i doubt it
haha
I extremely ***** doubt it.
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Is it me? Hell will see...

Contributed by another_dimension on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:17:13 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Time will tell
I sing it loud
Will all be well?
Forsaken souls
reek no benefits of honesty

In this world
Forgotten peace
silly girl
Will be forgotten
If she does not wake up in time

FOR THE JUDGEMENT
is soon
It will be all over
THE END IS EXTREMELY ***** NIGH
good old film quotes
rule the lives of most
Poor ghosts
IT IS YOUR FAULT

Heaven will not take me
Hell i doubt will too
The Devil and God have discussed that
Earth is a greater punishment
Than Hell
Will all be well?
Time will tell

But i doubt it
haha
I extremely ***** doubt it.

Copyright © another_dimension ... [ 2004-05-22 16:17:13]
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Re: Is it me? Hell will see... (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:22:35 PM AEST
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cool write.
thanks for sharing

Re: Is it me? Hell will see... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:27:48 PM AEST
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Wierd, I think I know what song you were listening to. I believe hell is a place far different than earth, never mind, your poem was interesting, indicative Nirvana. 4 stars

Re: Is it me? Hell will see... (User Rating: 1 )
by HOPE4ME2 on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 05:41:24 PM AEST
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Interesting write...so glad we serve a God of grace and mercy.

HOPE4ME2

Re: Is it me? Hell will see... (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 06:02:35 PM AEST
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Yeah, Nirvana rocks! they're the best! By any chance were you listening to Lake of Fire? Just an observation... I love that song. Cool poem, by the way.

Re: Is it me? Hell will see... (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:06:03 PM AEST
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I love the line about " good old film quotes rule the lives of most".

Vanessa

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