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[aid] => mick
[title] => That's not really me!
[time] => 2004-05-22 16:52:06
[hometext] => its hard to follow your heart nowadays when we live in such a corrupt world.... and its even harder to try and change your ways to try and be a better person for God.
[bodytext] => Deep within these golden locks my true me hides inside
So very few have met her, because she always hides
She's afraid of all things around... the real world you would say
and simple things like a pretty rose seems to make her day!
I wish that you could meet her... I wish that she was strong.
But every time she surfaces something must go wrong.
She then gets buried deeply.... and these other things arise.
And seem to cease my body right before my eyes.
These other things are stronger ...you may even think they're me
But Im telling you there is someone else that you have yet to see.
And every morning when I wake I pray to God that he will take ...
these other things away
making my life easier and perhaps a better day.
And even when she surfaces and feels that she is strong.
The ones who claim to love her most ...really wishes she were gone.
They love the other things that seem to captivate my soul.
The things that make me do the things that noone thinks are wrong.
I wish that I could be myself and let my true self shine with joy.
But I guess that's in a perfect world ...
...a fairytale... where the good girls shine.
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 210
[topic] => 61
[informant] => JennyFruFru
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
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[score] => 47
[ratings] => 10
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => selfstruggles
)
That's not really me!
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 04:52:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Deep within these golden locks my true me hides inside
So very few have met her, because she always hides
She's afraid of all things around... the real world you would say
and simple things like a pretty rose seems to make her day!
I wish that you could meet her... I wish that she was strong.
But every time she surfaces something must go wrong.
She then gets buried deeply.... and these other things arise.
And seem to cease my body right before my eyes.
These other things are stronger ...you may even think they're me
But Im telling you there is someone else that you have yet to see.
And every morning when I wake I pray to God that he will take ...
these other things away
making my life easier and perhaps a better day.
And even when she surfaces and feels that she is strong.
The ones who claim to love her most ...really wishes she were gone.
They love the other things that seem to captivate my soul.
The things that make me do the things that noone thinks are wrong.
I wish that I could be myself and let my true self shine with joy.
But I guess that's in a perfect world ...
...a fairytale... where the good girls shine.
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
... [
2004-05-22 16:52:06]
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Re: That's not really me!
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 05:06:35 PM AEST
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| that was a great write! you let out how you were feeling in such a perfect way. you have a true talent. it flows so well. |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 05:36:47 PM AEST
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Wait on Him
and let it be
for He will give
good things to thee
Trust in Him
rather than you
and He will show you
what to do.
Stitch |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 05:42:08 PM AEST
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for a moment here you did shine...don't be afraid to shine forth because if more people did it would change this world a lot more than you think
Shari |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by Archie on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 06:30:06 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem, You have a few misspellings in it, if you correct these it will be even better.
"We have this gift in a jar of clay so that God's all surpassing glory can be seen in the hearts of men" (women) |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:23:49 PM AEST
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be true to yourself always:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: That's not really me!
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 09:38:34 AM AEST
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| Brilliant piece with a true message. :) |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by venkat on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 12:23:40 AM AEST
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| beautiful insight..I wish happiness to the fairy that resides inside your soul..lovely poem. venkat |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:09:24 AM AEST
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| Excellent write ... well set out, and written with passion ... I hope you win this struggle to better yourself ... I don't think you need to worry though ... Jan |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:31:01 PM AEST
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WE MIGHT NOT GET TO SEE HER,BUT WE GET TO KNOW HER THRU THE GREAT WORDS YOU WRITE! YOU'RE LIKE A BEAUTIFUL ROSE,WE NEED NOT SEE ITS BEAUTY FOR WE CAN TELL BY JUST A HOLD!! YOU MAKE MY DAY AS FOR OTHERS AS WELL,SIMPLY BY WHAT YOUR HEART HAS TO SAY THRU WORDS THAT DO TRUELY TELL!!! IT'S A GREAT POEM ABOUT A BEAUTIFUL PERSON OUT OF MANY,& YES THAT IS YOU MY DEAR . . . JENNY!!!! nuff said!!!!!
LOL~DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:26:19 AM AEST
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Not to worry, my dear, God luvs u the same just as u r. That's jus one of Gods amazing traites. He looks beyond our faults and sees our needs.
Good write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:29:01 AM AEST
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You have dealt with a difficult subject so very well! Good and fine write!
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:50:10 AM AEST
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I can relate.
Very good write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: That's not really me!
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by allymp on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 09:22:19 PM AEST
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| this is honestly wonderful...and i think many people can relate..i no i can |
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