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[aid] => mick
[title] => Unlucky in Love
[time] => 2004-05-22 20:49:26
[hometext] => Not really a bad day, more like a bad love life. I always get hurt, or bored & then hurt, or fooled & then hurt, or something equally horrid goes wrong. What's wrong with me?
[bodytext] => Why is it that the ones that I love
Are never just quite what they seem?
Why is it that whenever I love
The stories all follow a theme?
Why does my search end negatively
When always it starts out so grand?
Why does my heart let itself be deceived
Whenever some guy is at hand?
Why do I feel so much that it blinds me?
How does it work? Let me know.
Why do I always end up hurt somehow?
How is it I can’t keep a beaux?
[comments] => 9
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[topic] => 63
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[ratings] => 5
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => hbadday
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Unlucky in Love
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 08:49:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Why is it that the ones that I love
Are never just quite what they seem?
Why is it that whenever I love
The stories all follow a theme?
Why does my search end negatively
When always it starts out so grand?
Why does my heart let itself be deceived
Whenever some guy is at hand?
Why do I feel so much that it blinds me?
How does it work? Let me know.
Why do I always end up hurt somehow?
How is it I can’t keep a beaux?
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Re: Unlucky in Love
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:05:14 PM AEST
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Hey there,
U asking the wrong person when u ask me. I've been around the block more times than I could count.
Mainly, I think it's many things but mostly the day and age we live in. the world out there in the fast lane is in kaos.
One thing tho I feel if we ever get to the right one then things would be better.
One thing in my own life is I have no paitence for the dumb ****.
Life isn't easy for anyone. Another thing after we've been hurt so many times we get scared of commitment.
I'm happy with myself so I feel that I'd have a better cahnce at the real thing.
I haven't even dated for five years but I took that time out to evaluate my own life and make peace with me.
Very good writing and I didn't mean to write a book. smiles.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Unlucky in Love
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:24:00 PM AEST
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well, your not alone in that, i almost moved to australia until i found out the man i loved was not genuine; but my hubby, b4 he died, was and well, still is the love of my life, my soulmate, so dont give up hope, just be yourself and true to you:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Unlucky in Love
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by Chrissylee on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:24:25 PM AEST
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| sorry can't help cause i am in the same situation i have decided that that is it for me no more broken hearts and misery i'll stay single from here on end its a promise i have made myself the walls are up and they are staying up |
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Re: Unlucky in Love
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by juliette on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:27:49 PM AEST
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I had the same ponderings for a long time and then realized we are so much better women without men!
P.S. - I am only half joking.......giggle,giggle
Thanks for sharing!
Juliette |
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Re: Unlucky in Love
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:42:57 PM AEST
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Valid questions are these! Might there be a simple answer?..... there's nothing wrong with you - rather, it was the relationships themselves that were wrong. Moving on... maybe... puts you on step closer to the right one.
.... just my thoughts on it.... although... I will probably be dropping my own questions onto the page later tonight! Truly! Really.... what do I know???!!!! Oh bother... I'll probably be up all night THINKING now!
Seriously... Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Unlucky in Love
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 03:39:11 AM AEST
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relationships are nothing but trouble. I only go for a relationship when I know true and true that I've found the right person. Proof of that is that I've never had a girlfriend... Maybe I wait to long?
You shouldnt keep searching, its better to bump into someone that search for someone. Suprise is its a good thing.Anyway this was a realy great write, filled with emotion and I'm sure you'll find the right person someday |
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Re: Unlucky in Love
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by eatfresh22 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:19:06 PM AEST
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Wow! I can totally relate. That was an incredible poem. It sure isn't fun when you cannot control your emotions, but maybe that's the beauty of love. I think that you'll discover true love that won't hurt you. An unconditional love. But, the pain can seem unbearable. Beautiful, honest, heartfelt poem. It was awesome to read it. Thanks.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Unlucky in Love
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:36:29 PM AEST
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Liquid dear you are human
and, alas, you're woman, too
Your story is old,
it has already been told,
but never told by you
I'll pray that God will bring you
the one that will stay for always,
but you know God will only bring him
on the one, exact, right day
Stitch |
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Re: Unlucky in Love
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:55:57 PM AEST
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Alas, I know something of how this feels. I think that when we're young we place too much in the emotional feelings of love. We haven't yet found the strength to handle it. Time passes, and the dreams fade away... some people come out of this with hurt feelings turned cynical. But there is much we can learn if we resist that. Much to learn about the nature of True Love, that is so different from the emotion...
Sometimes we don't want to admit that these strong feelings are meant to pass. Yet they do, and I believe God is there, bringing about something unknown but beautiful.
Take care, and keep hoping!
Andrew |
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