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Array ( [sid] => 48825 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Obsessed [time] => 2004-05-23 19:25:31 [hometext] => This poem is dedicated to my boyfriend and maybe some othere people i want but cant have! [bodytext] => Although I understand that i can do nothing To change the mistakes I've made
I hope when you read this you'll realize the truth
In what im about to say

Im not going to try to cover it up
Like many other people will do--
In instead I'll tell you Im honest in saying
That all i want is you

So many nights I've lain sleepless in bed
Meditating on your face
But i just can't face up to the fact
That in reality, I've lost the race

I doubt i could live without you around
You mean the world to me--
If i could go anywhere on Earth
In your arms is where i'd want to be

Too many tears have streamed down my face
To not let you know how i feel
At times it seems this whole thing is a dream
Until i remeber...it's real

I wish there was someway i could prove to you
How special I think you are
Im tired of keeping these feelings inside--
Its gone on way too far

Never have i felt what im feeling right now
You've put me in a trance
I promise i would'nt make you regret it
If you'd give me just half a chance

I really dont think you fully understand
How much i care for you
But for some reason i get the feeling
That theres nothing i really can do

I wouldnt think twice about giving my life
Just to keep you from harm
You're so much more perfect then i'll ever be
Your voice, Your smile, Your charm

You're all that i ever think of anymore
When i hope or dream or cry
Countless times i've been thinking of you
Wishing i could die

You dont understand how you've changed my life
I'll never be the same
You're more precious to me then all the money in the world
All the glory or power, or fame

I'd gladly give everthing i own
Just to prove how much i care
I'll never find anyone as perfect as you
You're far beyond compare

There's really nothing else i can do
I guess this is the end
But before i stop i want to tell you
That you're an incrediable friend

I only have one more thing to say
That i really want you to know
You'll always be an angel in my eyes
No matter where you go

But no matter what people think of you
If you're feeling lonely and sad
Or if you cant think of any reason to live
and life is terribly bad

Or if you feel like you cant go on
Just remeber what im saying is true
I dont care at all what happens
I'll Still love you! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 55 [informant] => BoriquaBaby703 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Obsessed

Contributed by BoriquaBaby703 on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:25:31 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Although I understand that i can do nothing To change the mistakes I've made
I hope when you read this you'll realize the truth
In what im about to say

Im not going to try to cover it up
Like many other people will do--
In instead I'll tell you Im honest in saying
That all i want is you

So many nights I've lain sleepless in bed
Meditating on your face
But i just can't face up to the fact
That in reality, I've lost the race

I doubt i could live without you around
You mean the world to me--
If i could go anywhere on Earth
In your arms is where i'd want to be

Too many tears have streamed down my face
To not let you know how i feel
At times it seems this whole thing is a dream
Until i remeber...it's real

I wish there was someway i could prove to you
How special I think you are
Im tired of keeping these feelings inside--
Its gone on way too far

Never have i felt what im feeling right now
You've put me in a trance
I promise i would'nt make you regret it
If you'd give me just half a chance

I really dont think you fully understand
How much i care for you
But for some reason i get the feeling
That theres nothing i really can do

I wouldnt think twice about giving my life
Just to keep you from harm
You're so much more perfect then i'll ever be
Your voice, Your smile, Your charm

You're all that i ever think of anymore
When i hope or dream or cry
Countless times i've been thinking of you
Wishing i could die

You dont understand how you've changed my life
I'll never be the same
You're more precious to me then all the money in the world
All the glory or power, or fame

I'd gladly give everthing i own
Just to prove how much i care
I'll never find anyone as perfect as you
You're far beyond compare

There's really nothing else i can do
I guess this is the end
But before i stop i want to tell you
That you're an incrediable friend

I only have one more thing to say
That i really want you to know
You'll always be an angel in my eyes
No matter where you go

But no matter what people think of you
If you're feeling lonely and sad
Or if you cant think of any reason to live
and life is terribly bad

Or if you feel like you cant go on
Just remeber what im saying is true
I dont care at all what happens
I'll Still love you!




Copyright © BoriquaBaby703 ... [ 2004-05-23 19:25:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Obsessed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:39:58 PM AEST
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wow! such devotion!
Nicely written!


Re: Obsessed (User Rating: 1 )
by TheNextRobertFrost on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 08:05:26 PM AEST
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this is a good poem


Re: Obsessed (User Rating: 1 )
by oldernotwiser on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:32:41 AM AEST
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This is very sweet. Are you sure the people you are speaking to know how you really feel? Honesty, while it often makes us more vulnerable, is always the most freeing route. I think it's the lies that tend to tangle, don't you?




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