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Array ( [sid] => 48944 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Autumn [time] => 2004-05-24 18:31:28 [hometext] => Kind of odd I wrote a poem on Autumn when its more like summer... O well, enjoy anyway :) [bodytext] => Once again an empty space to fill
More thought to burn through
Place of only thought to fill of you
But time creates and heals pain

Now it seems your nothing but a stranger
Just a figment once entwined among my dreams

Gone are my lost candles
Taken and torn
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Broken and worn

Fallen farther from me
Lost and missing
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Are my obscured secrets

Lay beside me among the burning forest
Take in the subtle hints of dusk
Bring me the rain to settle the flames
Absorb ruins never the same

Gone are my lost candles
Taken and torn
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Broken and worn

Fallen farther from me
Lost and missing
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Are my obscured secrets
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Autumn

Contributed by Soulless on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:31:28 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Once again an empty space to fill
More thought to burn through
Place of only thought to fill of you
But time creates and heals pain

Now it seems your nothing but a stranger
Just a figment once entwined among my dreams

Gone are my lost candles
Taken and torn
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Broken and worn

Fallen farther from me
Lost and missing
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Are my obscured secrets

Lay beside me among the burning forest
Take in the subtle hints of dusk
Bring me the rain to settle the flames
Absorb ruins never the same

Gone are my lost candles
Taken and torn
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Broken and worn

Fallen farther from me
Lost and missing
Crumpled along autumn leaves
Are my obscured secrets

Copyright © Soulless ... [ 2004-05-24 18:31:28]
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Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 06:59:51 PM AEST
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this is absolutely sooo beautiful, and i love this line so muchly, "Just a figment once entwined among my dreams", i always read your poems several times because they have so much meaning behind them and i do not want to miss anything, excellent as always!! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 12:14:44 AM AEST
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this was beautiful I took in every syllable it was breathtaking. I loved the part about the burning forests.

Bobo (Joel)

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