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[title] => The Beach
[time] => 2002-10-10 23:00:00
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[bodytext] => We walked along the beach today
Picking up shells as we go
Our eyes meeting so tenderly
Oh how our love does show
A smile here, a smile there
While leaving footprints in the sand
And ever so occasionally even
Those made from our hands
We pause to watch the waves roll in
And while it ebbs away
A picturesque scene, this does make
For us on this special day
And so we walk along the beach today
Picking up shells as we go
Just my 4 children and myself
And the love there that does show…
Mick Puttock
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The Beach
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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We walked along the beach today
Picking up shells as we go
Our eyes meeting so tenderly
Oh how our love does show
A smile here, a smile there
While leaving footprints in the sand
And ever so occasionally even
Those made from our hands
We pause to watch the waves roll in
And while it ebbs away
A picturesque scene, this does make
For us on this special day
And so we walk along the beach today
Picking up shells as we go
Just my 4 children and myself
And the love there that does show…
Mick Puttock
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Mick_Puttock
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2002-10-10 23:00:00]
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Re: The Beach
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 12:37:14 AM AEST
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| How your love shines through your words, excellent write Mick |
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Re: The Beach
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by Lia on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 02:07:51 AM AEST
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| Awww...I miss the beach so much. I can remember walking on the beach..the waves splashin against my feet..picking up seashells..the smell of the salt in the air...Had some good days on the beach. It's good that you can share it with you children :) |
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Re: The Beach
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by aernby on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 06:29:57 AM AEST
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Thanks for sharing the beach with us. I've been to the ocean side, in NovaScotia, in Texas, in Vancouver. Lived on tidewater for 14 years, North Atlantic tidewater, (james bay) not much beach combing thhere ...
good write it put me right there ---
aernby |
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Re: The Beach
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 07:46:04 AM AEST
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Ahhh... I remember when you wrote this and how much I enjoyed it then...almost as if I was there with you and the kids. Great, loving write, Mick..
Hugs,
Jen |
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Re: The Beach
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:40:25 AM AEST
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| I was a single parent of 3 small girls for a time in my life Mick. I know the love that is shared by you and your children. Very touching write...brings back many fond memories for me..Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. :o) Larry |
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Re: The Beach
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by OreO on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:34:28 PM AEST
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The Beach! Another one of my
favorite topics, Beautiful oh how
the sunrise sets rays, Beautiful how
the sunset ends the day! I'd love to
walk on the beach like that, this
took me to a beautiful place
with beautiful vision! It brought
tears to my eyes with the beauty
you have written here.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: The Beach
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 04:52:10 PM AEST
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lovely work
on this poem. |
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Re: The Beach
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by Sarah22 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 04:53:34 PM AEST
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you made the
beach sounds
like a beauitiful
place for me to
visit to in the
future ciao for now :*). |
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Re: The Beach
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by veggiechick on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 07:17:33 AM AEST
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| lifes a beach, friend, youve said it well |
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Re: The Beach
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 10:50:54 PM AEST
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| Awww, Mick, this is cute. Very nice write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: The Beach
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by venkat on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 06:59:03 AM AEST
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Nice work..we live very far to sea shore..once in three years we could go to coastal areas..
venkat |
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Re: The Beach
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:00:28 PM AEST
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Hello Mick:
Nice to meet you.. This is Raquel Leah.
I like your poem.. It is very very nice. I am very fond of the beach.. ocean..
I wrote my name in sand once, with my feet.. I was so tired by the time I finished lol.
That same day. there was this funeral.. I must write about it one of these days.. how the flowers waved and waded in the waters, waiting for the big waves to take it out.. with the ashes..
Thank you for allowing us to place our pictures on this site.. however, I had to crop mine so much, it is so very small.. I noticed the other pics showed up much larger.. is there a trick to it.. my pixels are way higher than those specified.. Let me know if you can.. thank very much..
I like your picture of you and your family.. it is a very happy picture..
Yours truly,
Raquel Leah (Poetess) ; )) |
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Re: The Beach
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 05:07:28 PM AEST
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beautiful, the imagery used here is superb.
-phil |
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