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Array ( [sid] => 49084 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Follow Me~ [time] => 2004-05-25 16:41:59 [hometext] => I wrote this about how i loved someone and told them how much they cared and they threw it all back at me.now this is to repay them lol:P [bodytext] => ~Follow Me~

follow my footsteps
hide in my shadows
kiss the floor i walk apon
breathe the air i let go off
touch the hearts of others
take their soul from underneath them
~Follow Me~

walk the cold nights
sleep the warm days
never awake
never asleep
one eye watching
waiting for me to move
curse my body
is the link invisible
it feels so real
i can see the rope
tied from soul to soul
heart to heart
breathe
kiss
beat
~Follow Me~

OoOoO the pain is an addiction
hungry for more
let me have it
tease me
dont please me
sleepless nights without you
haunt me
i can see your shadow
sit up
the night hovers
so long it bends and chokes me
~Follow Me~

see my soul
i beared it to you
you never beared your heart even
now we are locked forever
in a link of selfishness
jst.....~Follow Me~ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

~Follow Me~

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:41:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

~Follow Me~

follow my footsteps
hide in my shadows
kiss the floor i walk apon
breathe the air i let go off
touch the hearts of others
take their soul from underneath them
~Follow Me~

walk the cold nights
sleep the warm days
never awake
never asleep
one eye watching
waiting for me to move
curse my body
is the link invisible
it feels so real
i can see the rope
tied from soul to soul
heart to heart
breathe
kiss
beat
~Follow Me~

OoOoO the pain is an addiction
hungry for more
let me have it
tease me
dont please me
sleepless nights without you
haunt me
i can see your shadow
sit up
the night hovers
so long it bends and chokes me
~Follow Me~

see my soul
i beared it to you
you never beared your heart even
now we are locked forever
in a link of selfishness
jst.....~Follow Me~

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-05-25 16:41:59]
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Re: ~Follow Me~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Troubadour on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:44:58 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem. you didi an awesome job of expressing how you felt

Re: ~Follow Me~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 04:53:25 PM AEST
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Interesting write, (On the very last line there is a misspelled word)

Re: ~Follow Me~ (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 05:16:03 PM AEST
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very emotional write. i like it a lot. well done

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