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Array ( [sid] => 49296 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => confused [time] => 2004-05-27 06:55:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i´m entitled to moan
you don´t answer your phone
i hear nothing for days
i´m alone at my place
sit here thinking it through
sit here thinking of you
i thought i was your man
but you dont want me to understand.

one minute you´re here
next minute you´re gone
never get an explanation
have i done something wrong?
you tell me you love me
and that you think of me
i wanna believe
but you gotta let me in, please.

what the *****, what the ***** am i s´posed to do?
what the *****, you don´t even give me a ***** clue

see the pain in your eyes
slice my face with a knife
feel the love in your touch
i love you so much
feel so great when you´re here
hurt when you disappear
i thought i was your man
but you don´t want me to understand. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 43 [informant] => krisseee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

confused

Contributed by krisseee on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:55:45 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

i´m entitled to moan
you don´t answer your phone
i hear nothing for days
i´m alone at my place
sit here thinking it through
sit here thinking of you
i thought i was your man
but you dont want me to understand.

one minute you´re here
next minute you´re gone
never get an explanation
have i done something wrong?
you tell me you love me
and that you think of me
i wanna believe
but you gotta let me in, please.

what the *****, what the ***** am i s´posed to do?
what the *****, you don´t even give me a ***** clue

see the pain in your eyes
slice my face with a knife
feel the love in your touch
i love you so much
feel so great when you´re here
hurt when you disappear
i thought i was your man
but you don´t want me to understand.

Copyright Â© krisseee ... [ 2004-05-27 06:55:45]
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Re: confused (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:11:09 AM AEST
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That is not very nice making you wait around for her. If she had feelings like you have of her. she would be around you more often and would be calling. of course that is me. she may show you differently and you understand her. but you said you were confused. so tell her, liked your poem very much. like to see love from a man to a woman. sandy

Re: confused (User Rating: 1 )
by krisseee on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:14:25 AM AEST
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she has a lot of personal problems at the moment. not getting angry, just dont like to be pushed out.

Re: confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:55:36 AM AEST
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a very understandable poem, brother can i relate. best bet is to let her know how you feel or maybe let her read that excellent poem.
~vermillion~

Re: confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Brians_Sweety on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:23:44 PM AEST
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Great poem I'm sorry for your pain right now. I know how it is to be pushed out when all you wanna do is love someone. I am sure she will come back in due time especially since you love her so much, she can't resist you that long or I couldn't atleast. Good Luck!

Stephanie

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