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Array ( [sid] => 49620 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fast Words [time] => 2004-05-29 15:25:22 [hometext] => Anger is our biggest enemies, we need to beat it. [bodytext] => weak and pale
she staggers about
white and frail
she trys to shout

her heart is right
but her mind is wrong
selfishly she speaks.

her lips are scarred
her tongue is burnt
but her rage has killed the hurt.
flying passions tantrums, sprees
never will she think of her fees
to those shes cut
with words so sharp
to those shes killed
with her sad and angry life
her words are her very own knife.

yet in her heart
shes locked away
controlled by anger
day by day.
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Fast Words

Contributed by bttrflynajar on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

weak and pale
she staggers about
white and frail
she trys to shout

her heart is right
but her mind is wrong
selfishly she speaks.

her lips are scarred
her tongue is burnt
but her rage has killed the hurt.
flying passions tantrums, sprees
never will she think of her fees
to those shes cut
with words so sharp
to those shes killed
with her sad and angry life
her words are her very own knife.

yet in her heart
shes locked away
controlled by anger
day by day.

Copyright © bttrflynajar ... [ 2004-05-29 15:25:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fast Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:29:54 PM AEST
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This is quite powerful. Wow. Nicely done!

Re: Fast Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:10:27 PM AEST
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intriguing piece.

Re: Fast Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:42:57 PM AEST
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this reminds me of my piece, death awaits. anger cannot be beat because people have emotion and that is one of them. i think hatred should be eliminated before anger because hatred can be more destructive. but as i said anger is an emotion and so is hatred so they of course will be felt when they are called upon by a reaction.

Re: Fast Words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 03:34:17 AM AEST
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Very powerful write. I liked it.
Thanks for sharing!

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