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As I walk along the shore line
My bare feet in the sand
I long to see my sister
And take her by her hand
We may walk along in silence
For no words we’d have to say
And cherish every moment
As we walked along our way

We may talk about our childhood
The laughter and the fun
The joys that we both shared
When we where very young
We’d pause in breathless wonder
Of the beauty all around

And listen to that music
And the sounds from far beyond
So when I’m felling lonely
I’ll know just what I’ll do
I’ll take a walk along that shore
That takes me back to you

Written by
Dorothy Elaine Calvert
Copyrights©

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The Shore Line

Contributed by freespirit on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 10:40:26 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

THE SHORE LINE

As I walk along the shore line
My bare feet in the sand
I long to see my sister
And take her by her hand
We may walk along in silence
For no words we’d have to say
And cherish every moment
As we walked along our way

We may talk about our childhood
The laughter and the fun
The joys that we both shared
When we where very young
We’d pause in breathless wonder
Of the beauty all around

And listen to that music
And the sounds from far beyond
So when I’m felling lonely
I’ll know just what I’ll do
I’ll take a walk along that shore
That takes me back to you

Written by
Dorothy Elaine Calvert
Copyrights©

Copyright Â© freespirit ... [ 2004-05-30 10:40:26]
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Re: The Shore Line (User Rating: 1 )
by Zaf_Stud on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:56:24 PM AEST
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That's a pretty write!
It speaks of the beauty of nature as well as the happy memories that associate with it...
Well done Elaine :)
Zaf_Stud

Re: The Shore Line (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:03:20 PM AEST
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this is beautifully done:) hugs n' love, nessa

@->>->:-

Re: The Shore Line (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:50:37 PM AEST
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I really liked the how the memories envoked really conveyed the love for the sister. Very well done piece.

Re: The Shore Line (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 06:53:36 AM AEST
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Freespirit

I found this to be a beautiful poem and a nice tribute to nature God and your sister. I am hopeful that she is still with you--if not dear one Take that lovely walk.
I want to read all of your poetry,but must comment on others now.

Your friend
Sinned

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