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Array ( [sid] => 49717 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DRY [time] => 2004-05-30 12:00:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wanna cry
But my tears are dry
I wanna give up
But my heart still pumps

If I could only know why
My tears are dry

I purposally sabitog my way
Like misery has a hand on me

I smile in the face of certain death
But then pout
When I'm left to rest
Thru another sleep
With another breath

When my tears are dry

I wish I could cry
I wish I could cry
I wish I could cry
But my tears are dry [comments] => 4 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 32 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

DRY

Contributed by rhei76 on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:00:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I wanna cry
But my tears are dry
I wanna give up
But my heart still pumps

If I could only know why
My tears are dry

I purposally sabitog my way
Like misery has a hand on me

I smile in the face of certain death
But then pout
When I'm left to rest
Thru another sleep
With another breath

When my tears are dry

I wish I could cry
I wish I could cry
I wish I could cry
But my tears are dry

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-05-30 12:00:26]
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Re: DRY (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:59:11 PM AEST
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this is sad!
i can relate with this one.
some times it is just impossible to cry. its horrid, i know because you feel like you are going to burst but you can let t out!
i know how you feel.
you expressd your-self brilliantly in this!!

Re: DRY (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:47:13 PM AEST
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Cleanly, simply-worded emotion. This poem very sucessfully conveyed the pain the author has felt. Very nice work.

Re: DRY (User Rating: 1 )
by bttrflynajar on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 10:42:55 PM AEST
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love it, so much emotion. keep it up, and may i suggest publishing?
~bttrFlY~

Re: DRY (User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 12:15:19 AM AEST
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I like this poem. I think you project your emotion well in it.
However I only have 2 concerns:
1) I personally prefer proper spelling i.e not thru. It diminishes a poem that does not need it. It is a good read and thus using these incorrect spellings seems wrong.
2) I feel the emotion in the poem but I feel you could put it up one more level. I dont know how but I felt like I missed out on something more.

Sorry, I feel its better to be honest. :D

Carry on. This is really good.

Nathan

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