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Array ( [sid] => 50091 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Surprise! [time] => 2004-06-02 09:16:11 [hometext] => Thanks To Em [bodytext] => the unsecure announcement
of my unfiltered sap
taken as a complement
was a welcome surprise
________________________________


Where at thru voice, such a beautiful thing,
When words sound so clear, crisp, like an
Angel's song, that seems to play, echo, and
Sing thru out my day, I smile in surprise
________________________________

I'm not really sure why I would speak so clearly to some one, I'm not always so sappy, when it comes to things as of, so thru the actions of I, I was surprise
________________________________

Her rebuttle was sweet, a complement she
Said, a complement
To angel for angel, your words so I hold
From time to time they help keep me alive,
And they always give me a smile, so please
Take my words of sap and let them help you
Smile, for your rebuttle was the sweetest
complement of surprise
________________________________

I'm glad I wrote you, I'm happy to read you, I
Think it's cool I found you, for no longer are
My thoughts of sadder days, thank you my
Sweet for the innocent joy you have given,
Thank you for the smile and your words, the
Emotions you deliever, to help me float away,
Thank you for the most welcome surprise,
Therefore Em you'll always have me on
Your side, Surprise [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 55 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Surprise!

Contributed by rhei76 on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:16:11 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



the unsecure announcement
of my unfiltered sap
taken as a complement
was a welcome surprise
________________________________


Where at thru voice, such a beautiful thing,
When words sound so clear, crisp, like an
Angel's song, that seems to play, echo, and
Sing thru out my day, I smile in surprise
________________________________

I'm not really sure why I would speak so clearly to some one, I'm not always so sappy, when it comes to things as of, so thru the actions of I, I was surprise
________________________________

Her rebuttle was sweet, a complement she
Said, a complement
To angel for angel, your words so I hold
From time to time they help keep me alive,
And they always give me a smile, so please
Take my words of sap and let them help you
Smile, for your rebuttle was the sweetest
complement of surprise
________________________________

I'm glad I wrote you, I'm happy to read you, I
Think it's cool I found you, for no longer are
My thoughts of sadder days, thank you my
Sweet for the innocent joy you have given,
Thank you for the smile and your words, the
Emotions you deliever, to help me float away,
Thank you for the most welcome surprise,
Therefore Em you'll always have me on
Your side, Surprise




Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-06-02 09:16:11]
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Re: Surprise! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:04:52 PM AEST
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A very nice surprize for someone.
good work.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Surprise! (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:10:10 AM AEST
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good write




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