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It hurts with just a touch
My soul is crying out for death
Death that will end this pain

The cold gun in my hand
Fear i cant withstand
I bring the gun to my head,
wishing i was dead

I place a razor in my wrist
Applying pressure as soft as a kiss
Then harder down like the punch of a fist

A line of blood deeply appears
Everything dissapears, all my fears
It runs fast emptying all the pain
Doing this isnt all in vain

This will only help for a while
Then ill be sick and vile
Like they think of me
Then ill be back in my room,
Put a blade to my wrist, wanting death to come soon. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 13 [informant] => willow_tara72002 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Blades That End Pain

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:52:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The pain thats just to much
It hurts with just a touch
My soul is crying out for death
Death that will end this pain

The cold gun in my hand
Fear i cant withstand
I bring the gun to my head,
wishing i was dead

I place a razor in my wrist
Applying pressure as soft as a kiss
Then harder down like the punch of a fist

A line of blood deeply appears
Everything dissapears, all my fears
It runs fast emptying all the pain
Doing this isnt all in vain

This will only help for a while
Then ill be sick and vile
Like they think of me
Then ill be back in my room,
Put a blade to my wrist, wanting death to come soon.

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-06-02 14:52:30]
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Re: Blades That End Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:09:59 PM AEST
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its a good poem, very emotional, yet I've seen and written alot of these, in my personal opinion suicide and cut poems become very old very quick. Yet this was a startiling poem, as it was so well written and thought of, so I guess I cant always apply that same rule over and over again.
The sad thing is the reason why cut and suicide poems are more frequent, is because more of us are doing it.
This was a very good poem

Re: Blades That End Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by diamond_tears on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:44:43 PM AEST
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fab poem, very visual and emotional... true many of us have been in this situation

Re: Blades That End Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:26:51 PM AEST
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Fabulous poem! I really liked it. I've been there many times. In fact, I still am there. Great job putting all the feelings I feel inot words. It was truley wonderful.

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