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The world has collapsed and I just happened to be in the way
I told her how you left me to find out why you’re alive
And that I would be okay

She said you have to learn to let go, know when to say goodbye
Because I don’t, because I never did in the first place
She asked if I could say one thing to you what would it be
I just said you went away, way too soon

She held my hand and said everyone goes through this
That the heart can’t live without love by its side
I told her how you said the same thing when I was away
And that I would be okay

She said you have to learn to move on, don’t live in yesterday
Because I don’t, because I never did in the first place
She asked if I could say one thing to you what would it be
I just said you went away, way too soon

Now that this coffee tastes of tears and last regrets
I want you to remember, don’t ever forget
That you went away too soon
And I’m missing you
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Check Please

Contributed by paper-heart-hero on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:57:13 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I told her everything I ever lived for has died here tonight
The world has collapsed and I just happened to be in the way
I told her how you left me to find out why you’re alive
And that I would be okay

She said you have to learn to let go, know when to say goodbye
Because I don’t, because I never did in the first place
She asked if I could say one thing to you what would it be
I just said you went away, way too soon

She held my hand and said everyone goes through this
That the heart can’t live without love by its side
I told her how you said the same thing when I was away
And that I would be okay

She said you have to learn to move on, don’t live in yesterday
Because I don’t, because I never did in the first place
She asked if I could say one thing to you what would it be
I just said you went away, way too soon

Now that this coffee tastes of tears and last regrets
I want you to remember, don’t ever forget
That you went away too soon
And I’m missing you




Copyright © paper-heart-hero ... [ 2004-06-02 21:57:13]
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Re: Check Please (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:07:10 AM AEST
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Very touching and heartfelt. Excellent piece, and well-worded.
Andrew


Re: Check Please (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 04:52:21 PM AEST
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I wish I had a friend to cry over coffee with. Miss our talks James. This is an excellent write. Everything is so bittersweet and brutal. You are amazing!

Lindsey




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