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Array ( [sid] => 50187 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HEAR MY PRAYER [time] => 2004-06-02 23:12:22 [hometext] => Most of the witnesses to the true sufferings of the American Indian, are dead now..... Only the Great Spirit of Creation remembers them all. He will not forget the Indian, nor will he forget those that slaughtered them.....Someday he will repay! [bodytext] =>

"HEAR MY PRAYER"

O' Great Spirit hear my prayer.
This is "Little Cave Bear" calling you.
Caves are my hiding place,
from the angry pale face.
They have killed my one man.
O' Great Spirit, find him if you can.

We have no where to go...
They kill our Buffalo.
Hunt us down like deer.
We hide like fawn in fear.

O' Great Spirit Mother Earth
They take our land,
No place to give birth.
Our babies die while we run
Our papooses are barren.

You can find me here
O' Great Mother Earth
I will live like a bear in a cave.
From this place I'll not be taken
When pale faces leave.
I'll come out only to grieve.

Hear my prayer O' Great One
What was it we have done?
When I was small many moons from this day.
My moccasins were happy to walk in our way.
Will we be free someday?
Please hear my prayer......
This is "Little Cave Bear" talking to you.

Created by
Lovingcritters
June 2, 2004
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


"WHEN THERE WAS WAR"

"I did not know then how much was ended.
When I look back now from this high hill of
my old age, I can still see the butchered woman
and children lying heaped and scattered all
along the crooked gulch as plain as when I
saw them with eyes still young. And I can see
that something else died there in the bloody
mud, and was buried in the blizzard. A people's
dream died there. It was a beautiful dream...
the nations hoop is broken, and scattered.
There is no center any longer, and the
sacred tree is dead.
~Black Elk~ Lakota~

"Buckets of Tears and Blood!"
May we never forget...............

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HEAR MY PRAYER

Contributed by lovingcritters on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:12:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief





"HEAR MY PRAYER"

O' Great Spirit hear my prayer.
This is "Little Cave Bear" calling you.
Caves are my hiding place,
from the angry pale face.
They have killed my one man.
O' Great Spirit, find him if you can.

We have no where to go...
They kill our Buffalo.
Hunt us down like deer.
We hide like fawn in fear.

O' Great Spirit Mother Earth
They take our land,
No place to give birth.
Our babies die while we run
Our papooses are barren.

You can find me here
O' Great Mother Earth
I will live like a bear in a cave.
From this place I'll not be taken
When pale faces leave.
I'll come out only to grieve.

Hear my prayer O' Great One
What was it we have done?
When I was small many moons from this day.
My moccasins were happy to walk in our way.
Will we be free someday?
Please hear my prayer......
This is "Little Cave Bear" talking to you.

Created by
Lovingcritters
June 2, 2004
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


"WHEN THERE WAS WAR"

"I did not know then how much was ended.
When I look back now from this high hill of
my old age, I can still see the butchered woman
and children lying heaped and scattered all
along the crooked gulch as plain as when I
saw them with eyes still young. And I can see
that something else died there in the bloody
mud, and was buried in the blizzard. A people's
dream died there. It was a beautiful dream...
the nations hoop is broken, and scattered.
There is no center any longer, and the
sacred tree is dead.
~Black Elk~ Lakota~

"Buckets of Tears and Blood!"
May we never forget...............





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Re: HEAR MY PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:27:01 PM AEST
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My heart goes out to the Native Americans. They got the shaft big time. And they still are. My step-father was Indian and taught me many ways of the indians. I highly respect them because they tried to be one with the earth and didn't try to conquer it.Sorry, got off on a rant. Very good write, very descriptive of the plight of the indians.That, was it an article, at the end was the clincher. Kudos.
Thumps ; 0 )


Re: HEAR MY PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:56:13 PM AEST
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Yes the longest war in history....but all did not die, and Black Elk Speaks, to this very day.

Long and bitter trails, many tears, bitter/sweet victories, and the cold winter of death, Wounded Knee, but the circle is the circle and lives forever.

Beautiful Prayer, Thank you for sharing.

Chris


Re: HEAR MY PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:08:34 AM AEST
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Wow Mom,
This is an awesome write. the graphics are great. A masterpeice that they can't take away.
Great work.
luv, huggs,
your brat,
emy


Re: HEAR MY PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:53:19 AM AEST
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Wow that is wonder write.
thanks for shareing it with us.


Re: HEAR MY PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:55:58 AM AEST
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strong words, may we never forget any injustice

Shari


Re: HEAR MY PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 03:14:55 AM AEST
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Wonderful and touching... So many things are forgotten that should not be...
Hugs,
Hur


Re: HEAR MY PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:59:54 PM AEST
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Connie the Indian Folk of America have found a true friend in you this is a beautiful poem and depicts just some of the hardships and injustices that the native born had to suffer and sometimes still do. Thankyou for very profound read.

poetic hugs from

bernard.


Re: HEAR MY PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:02:01 PM AEST
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you´re amazing, CONNIE!!! this was wonderful!!! I loved it very much! love, aika:-)


Re: HEAR MY PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:24:14 AM AEST
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wonderfully touching..great spirits forgotten...
Mother earth is the real witness for all things happened in history...thank my friend for sharing your wisdom.. venkat


Re: HEAR MY PRAYER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:54:21 PM AEST
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nicewrite consue
I have always been a fan of the Native Americans.




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