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Array ( [sid] => 50193 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I wonder [time] => 2004-06-03 00:09:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wonder if you think of me
the way I think of you
I wonder if you lie awake
as often as I do
I wonder if you miss "us"
if you ever cared
I wonder if you listened
or if I just got lifeless stares
I wonder why I hurt so much
I know you wont come back
I wonder why I try so hard
I know that I still lack
I wonder when you had the thought
to leave me all alone
I wonder how to make it up
or If I can atone
I wonder when I lost my grip
and let you slip away
I wonder why I didnt stop you
when you left that day
I wonder if you remember me
and recall those things you said
I wonder if it was even real
or a hazy dream in my head
I wonder why I think youll return
I convince myself still
I wonder why I think you loved me
you didnt and never will.... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I wonder

Contributed by holderofthestone on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:09:35 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I wonder if you think of me
the way I think of you
I wonder if you lie awake
as often as I do
I wonder if you miss "us"
if you ever cared
I wonder if you listened
or if I just got lifeless stares
I wonder why I hurt so much
I know you wont come back
I wonder why I try so hard
I know that I still lack
I wonder when you had the thought
to leave me all alone
I wonder how to make it up
or If I can atone
I wonder when I lost my grip
and let you slip away
I wonder why I didnt stop you
when you left that day
I wonder if you remember me
and recall those things you said
I wonder if it was even real
or a hazy dream in my head
I wonder why I think youll return
I convince myself still
I wonder why I think you loved me
you didnt and never will....

Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-06-03 00:09:35]
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Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:23:08 AM AEST
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Good poem...your emotions well expressed.
venkat

Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:27:36 AM AEST
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I know the feelings.
Very good writing and questions.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:46:58 AM AEST
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you don't need a love like that, you have a soulmate. good job with the write, it came out beautiful.

Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:59:08 PM AEST
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Another fantastic poem from you. I especially liked this one. I enjoy reading your writing and it flows perfectly

Take Care
- Becca

Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:00:23 AM AEST
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If I had was that girl...I would hate myself for evver leaving someone so caring and willing to love me...I would hat emyself...becaus ei oucld have had something that made me happy...she needs to see...that you care...I loved it....
Dani

Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 12:31:25 AM AEST
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I wonder if you think of me
the way I think of you

Perfect opening, holder.... We've probably all been there at some point - though, perhaps, the question looms larger for some. I like this one! Nicely done!

Re: I wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:39:38 AM AEST
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Excellent, I thought it was extreamly touching. Wonderful yet so very sad as you are coming to the whole relisation of it all. I think thats what makes it so moving. Once again very enjoyable.
Corinna

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