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Array ( [sid] => 50215 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'll be back... [time] => 2004-06-03 08:22:46 [hometext] => It's kind long..and not that good..but whatever [bodytext] => I feel so dinstant.
I'm in this world,
Just walking around
In a dazzed manner.

I see these faces,
Each one different
From the first.

I'm searching.
I don't know what for,
But when I find it
I'll know.

The once friendly faces
Glare at me.
Everyone is staring
At me.

My head is spinning,
Or maybe it's this hallway.
I look into people's eyes;
They feel all so cold.

I start shaking.
I need to get out of here.
I try to run,
But can't.

No matter where I'll go,
They'll follow.
I need to be free.
I have to break loose.

My breaths become short.
I can't breathe!

Please,
Someone,
Anyone,
Save me.
Please!

I see those bright green eyes,
Sparkling back at me.

Have you come to save me?

Our hands meet,
And I can feel you're strong grip
Pulling me close to you.

I can walk now.
Run if I need to.
Come with me
If you can catch up.

I'm right here,
Can't you see?
Why are you leaving me?

As it all sinks in,
I realize
Your not the one leaving me.
It's me.
I'm leaving you.

This is the way it has to be.
Please don't ask any questions,
For I don't have any answers.

I'll be back
Right now,
I just need to be alone.
I have to collect my thoughts.

But don't worry my dear,
Can't you see
There's no reason to fear.

I love you,
And always will.

I'll be back
For you
Just as soon
As I find me.

*~Stace~* [comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Princesaazul16 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
I'll be back...

Contributed by Princesaazul16 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:22:46 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I feel so dinstant.
I'm in this world,
Just walking around
In a dazzed manner.

I see these faces,
Each one different
From the first.

I'm searching.
I don't know what for,
But when I find it
I'll know.

The once friendly faces
Glare at me.
Everyone is staring
At me.

My head is spinning,
Or maybe it's this hallway.
I look into people's eyes;
They feel all so cold.

I start shaking.
I need to get out of here.
I try to run,
But can't.

No matter where I'll go,
They'll follow.
I need to be free.
I have to break loose.

My breaths become short.
I can't breathe!

Please,
Someone,
Anyone,
Save me.
Please!

I see those bright green eyes,
Sparkling back at me.

Have you come to save me?

Our hands meet,
And I can feel you're strong grip
Pulling me close to you.

I can walk now.
Run if I need to.
Come with me
If you can catch up.

I'm right here,
Can't you see?
Why are you leaving me?

As it all sinks in,
I realize
Your not the one leaving me.
It's me.
I'm leaving you.

This is the way it has to be.
Please don't ask any questions,
For I don't have any answers.

I'll be back
Right now,
I just need to be alone.
I have to collect my thoughts.

But don't worry my dear,
Can't you see
There's no reason to fear.

I love you,
And always will.

I'll be back
For you
Just as soon
As I find me.

*~Stace~*




Copyright © Princesaazul16 ... [ 2004-06-03 08:22:46]
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Re: I'll be back... (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:54:18 AM AEST
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what do you mean this isnt very good? this is great! its very sad sometimes when you have to find yourself and nobody seems to understand, i have the same problem at times. At times we need to just find ourselves and really think about what is worth it. Just hang in there you sound like a good person and whoever this is pertaining too im sure understands, at least hopefully.

brandon


Re: I'll be back... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:01:25 AM AEST
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How dare you sayn that this isn't any good, it is brilliant as always,

takecare
pixie xx




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