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A different razor drags along the same wrists, Each drop of blood that hits the floor is anther betrayal. So weak, so fragile, easily broken. Hurt from being used, used because of the hurt. Nothing is ever real, everyone lies. Weary from starving, so tired and alone.

A head filled with too many thoughts all meaningless and empty. Begging again for something real, everything is FAKE. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 13 [informant] => deadinside [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Fake

Contributed by deadinside on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:18:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Days are so long, each minute a struggle. Blurred as days pass, everyday is just the same...different tears from the same eyes.

A different razor drags along the same wrists, Each drop of blood that hits the floor is anther betrayal. So weak, so fragile, easily broken. Hurt from being used, used because of the hurt. Nothing is ever real, everyone lies. Weary from starving, so tired and alone.

A head filled with too many thoughts all meaningless and empty. Begging again for something real, everything is FAKE.

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Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:15:34 PM AEST
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everything is fake to some degree yes. truth is hand in hand with lies. if everyone lies, does that mean you do also? what if they are telling the truth and you just deny its the truth? i dont know what is happening so i dont know. ill just assume you are telling the truth. a very well written piece. you need to stop doing these thngs to yourself they might end up controlling you too much. i wish you the best in the future.

Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:27:59 PM AEST
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Great write.
So very true.

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